for first posting...katsieJanuary 30 2007, 01:44:09 UTC
Archie spoke! :)
Ugh, I can see why this portion is so hard for you to write. It's painful just to read! I still want more, of course *g* Hal does seem to be getting smacked a lot recently. It's going to get uglier, I just know it.
*cuddles all and sundry, then bops Hal and Guido, but mostly Hal at the moment*
Re: for first posting...hotspur18January 30 2007, 01:52:38 UTC
It is hard. Mostly because this /had/ to happen (Grigor warned Guido about it back in Borodino) but it's like lancing an infected wound, it gets much, much worse before it can get better.
But it will get better :-) eventually...*ducks and hides*
Of Bush, flashbacks and brothers . . .blade_and_rosesFebruary 21 2007, 00:04:13 UTC
William Bush is growing on me. He's taken Guido, Edrington, Pitt, that madhouse, assorted spies and assassins, unexpected rescue missions and a resurrected friend without blinking an eye. And I /loved/ his assessment of Hal -- wouldn't even have made lieutenant! Hah!
The brothers (both sets) are in trouble, arent't they? A really bad flashback for Guido and Hal, except this time, no mad older brother standing between them and the girl. This time it's for real, just between them. Wanna thump Hal now, for not seeing how much this can screw up Guido . . .
And Archie still trying to shield Horatio *sobs* Oh damn, this is gonna be painful, and yet so worth reading . . .
Re: Of Bush, flashbacks and brothers . . .hotspur18February 21 2007, 00:47:38 UTC
*hugs tight* No intention of it! The next giant chunk *stares at it* is almost ready...more angst, more punches, Really Bad Decisions, et al.
And yeah...Hal and Guido have a lot they should have said a long, long time ago, Archie's an idiot, and Horatio is - *pets him* going to have a horrible time, because it's Horatio, and he always does.
Bush is just coolness on legs *G* but then I always admired how quickly he understood the Sawyer thing...look how long it took the other two to even start thinking!
*suddenly snorts* You know, this would be so much easier if I weren't writing about MEN!
Writing about . . .blade_and_rosesFebruary 21 2007, 18:44:01 UTC
Ah, but if you weren't writing about this lot -- the story might be very very boring *tries to imagine a story featuring Buckland, Hobbs and Eccleston . . . nah, can't*
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Ugh, I can see why this portion is so hard for you to write. It's painful just to read! I still want more, of course *g* Hal does seem to be getting smacked a lot recently. It's going to get uglier, I just know it.
*cuddles all and sundry, then bops Hal and Guido, but mostly Hal at the moment*
I love the new header, by the way!
*goes back to waiting "patiently" for more*
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But it will get better :-) eventually...*ducks and hides*
xx
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The brothers (both sets) are in trouble, arent't they? A really bad flashback for Guido and Hal, except this time, no mad older brother standing between them and the girl. This time it's for real, just between them. Wanna thump Hal now, for not seeing how much this can screw up Guido . . .
And Archie still trying to shield Horatio *sobs* Oh damn, this is gonna be painful, and yet so worth reading . . .
Don't stop?!?
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And yeah...Hal and Guido have a lot they should have said a long, long time ago, Archie's an idiot, and Horatio is - *pets him* going to have a horrible time, because it's Horatio, and he always does.
Bush is just coolness on legs *G* but then I always admired how quickly he understood the Sawyer thing...look how long it took the other two to even start thinking!
*suddenly snorts* You know, this would be so much easier if I weren't writing about MEN!
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Checking back soon!
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I enjoyed the voice you gave to the characters Guido is so very interesting on so many levels and Hal is noisy but entertaining.
I am glad Archie woke up now someone needs to fix him.
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But I am so thrilled you've read this and liked it!
:-) xx
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