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confiteor_3

On the Wings of Humans

Mar 01, 2009 22:32

Title: On the Wings of Humans
Fandom: Merlin (bbc)
Rating: PG
Length: 1,040
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Summary: Uther is sick. Arthur is desperate.
Note: Written for jacklemmon, prompt: someone wake me up, in participation of merlinarthurfqf's mini exchange. Um, my utilizing of the prompt is kind of vague and abstract…sorry.
( …on the wings of humans… )

merlin/arthur, merlin, oneshot

Comments 36

gestaltrose March 2 2009, 03:43:37 UTC

aw wonderful job honey!

confiteor_3 March 2 2009, 03:48:45 UTC

Gah! You are fast. ♥ I'm still doing my read-thru-after-posting.

sleepingfingers March 2 2009, 04:51:42 UTC

I really like the ending imagery of Arthur kneeling at Merlin's feet, head resting against his knees. :)

confiteor_3 March 2 2009, 05:48:27 UTC

Thanks. :)

BTW, icon love!

zephre March 2 2009, 05:16:04 UTC

nicely done, and a beautiful closing image.

confiteor_3 March 2 2009, 05:48:40 UTC

Thank you!

my_maverick March 2 2009, 05:50:44 UTC

That was very nice. The ending is beautifully picturesque. Well done ♥

confiteor_3 March 3 2009, 16:13:34 UTC

Thank you! ♥

vanishing_cake March 2 2009, 06:25:31 UTC

Aw, this was lovely! Everyone was just about right, but Arthur was really, really good in this, and that last scene? Beautiful.

confiteor_3 March 2 2009, 15:21:44 UTC

Thanks! I actualy started writing this the first time in Arthur's pov, but couldn't get him right, so I'm glad he turned out good.