your note on this chapter is pretty accurate.. I feel a bit like someone has grabbed my heart and squeezed it, im actually crying and smiling.. I never wanted to like this story because I typically don't like fics which contain noncon stuff.. so I honestly don't know why I even started reading it but there is something about it which kept me reading.. probably the fact that you are really talented.. this chapter is really good and I am hoping for happy bumming in the next :)
I knew I had a really interesting angle on this story, but I was terrified to start posting and have people think I was a terrible person. I am glad you gave it a chance. Next chapter will be all about feeling good (and dirty).
Well, you didn't lie in your note. This chapter was fantastic. It brought home so much of the emotional shifts that have occurred throughout this story. So much hurt. But so much happiness and hope for the future!
Genius! I love this chapter. Saboo makes a surprisingly good therapist even though he can never entirely stop being snarky. You've got him down perfectly - I can so picture him tapping his teacup impatiently on the table... but even so, he manages to get to the heart of what's happening to Howard, and to get Howard to realise it as well.
And then that little scene in the kitchen... oh, my heart. Howard peeling carrots and thinking up recipes while having that incredibly significant conversation with Vince... and Vince saying he doesn't mind if they never do that (even though he DOES mind, a lot)... and Howard being all manly and carrying Vince upstairs... and your last line is perfect. Completely perfect.
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The dub step/country and western is hilarious LOL
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Yes. That's exactly right!
Well, you didn't lie in your note. This chapter was fantastic. It brought home so much of the emotional shifts that have occurred throughout this story. So much hurt. But so much happiness and hope for the future!
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And then that little scene in the kitchen... oh, my heart. Howard peeling carrots and thinking up recipes while having that incredibly significant conversation with Vince... and Vince saying he doesn't mind if they never do that (even though he DOES mind, a lot)... and Howard being all manly and carrying Vince upstairs... and your last line is perfect. Completely perfect.
I'm looking forward to the smut now too!
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