OMG love it!!! this fic is pretty powerfull. Event though it have been sometime, reading a new chapter brings all the feels of previous chapters with grater force.
The romantic bit at the end was extremely sexy fir me...don't now if because the lack of smut lately or what..because less is not more when we are talking about smut!
"It's Howard T.J. Moon, and I'm Vince's... I'm Vince's, and I won't have you pawing at him and being disrespectful." Vince smiled and squeezed Howard's hand. Howard couldn't bring himself to say 'boyfriend' or 'lover'. He thought those terms sounded silly. Vince had rejected 'partner' as too business-like and 'gentleman companion' as too Howardy, leaving them at an impasse.
This was so perfect that I inadvertently made this weird noise like a crane choking on a kazoo.
And I was so thrilled to see Man of Action mode Howard make an appearance! I love when Howard gets all hero-y and bold.
Also, the fact that Howard didn't get that Vince's past flings are all similarly tall and handsome because they resemble Howard was so deliciously angsty and Howard-like.
And I so loved the warm fuzzies from how sweet they are together, with their love-making and snuggling and dream-sharing and romance <33333
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I might have sat and screamed throughout the whole confrontation scene. Mostly because Howard being protective and heroic is one of my favourite things ever, but mostly because it was such a nice callback to Howard before his ordeal. The way they communicate now is so beautiful! Ack. I need several lines of this fic tattoed on my forehead, basically.
You should get the whole story tattooed on your body! What a conversation starter for the next time you run into Noel.
I wanted to touch on impotence, because that's such a anxiety cycle for men, and I thought Howard actually being able to adeptly handle an awkward social situation was a nice counter part to that. He was always a bit better at dealing with monsters than with people, but I thought the idea of anyone not respecting Vince's personal space would be something he could not tolerate. Then they decided to have sex. I'm just along for the ride, these boys are telling the story.
I think Howard would really like to be Vince's protector, but he doesn't really believe he's capable. He thinks he needs to become someone different to be strong, because he doesn't see his own strengths. I thought this was a situation that would get him out of his head enough to not worry about being embarrassed.
I'll have to keep your kink in mind when I write your story...
What a wonderful chapter to come back to! (Writer's block must be catching at the moment; I've been suffering from it too.)
I particularly love the shared dreams and the way they use them for honest communication via the images projected on the walls. They have come so far since those earlier chapters, so although a few things are still broken, we can now be confident that they will end up all mended. Meanwhile the dreamsex is gorgeous, their clothes just magically melting away... mmm, a mental image to conjure with...
I don't care how long it takes, I'm sticking with this story right to the end!
I remember someone citing clothes melting away like in a dream as something she hated in smut. Being me, I thought I needed to work that trope into a story!
Obviously, when I'm on I write like a fucking demon! When I get blocked, I look at what I've already written and wonder how any human could manage to even come up with that many words.
I hope you feel inspired soon because that teaser you gave us... Where's my banging stick?
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The romantic bit at the end was extremely sexy fir me...don't now if because the lack of smut lately or what..because less is not more when we are talking about smut!
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This bit here:
"It's Howard T.J. Moon, and I'm Vince's... I'm Vince's, and I won't have you pawing at him and being disrespectful."
Vince smiled and squeezed Howard's hand. Howard couldn't bring himself to say 'boyfriend' or 'lover'. He thought those terms sounded silly. Vince had rejected 'partner' as too business-like and 'gentleman companion' as too Howardy, leaving them at an impasse.
This was so perfect that I inadvertently made this weird noise like a crane choking on a kazoo.
And I was so thrilled to see Man of Action mode Howard make an appearance! I love when Howard gets all hero-y and bold.
Also, the fact that Howard didn't get that Vince's past flings are all similarly tall and handsome because they resemble Howard was so deliciously angsty and Howard-like.
And I so loved the warm fuzzies from how sweet they are together, with their love-making and snuggling and dream-sharing and romance <33333 ( ... )
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I wanted to touch on impotence, because that's such a anxiety cycle for men, and I thought Howard actually being able to adeptly handle an awkward social situation was a nice counter part to that. He was always a bit better at dealing with monsters than with people, but I thought the idea of anyone not respecting Vince's personal space would be something he could not tolerate. Then they decided to have sex. I'm just along for the ride, these boys are telling the story.
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I'll have to keep your kink in mind when I write your story...
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I particularly love the shared dreams and the way they use them for honest communication via the images projected on the walls. They have come so far since those earlier chapters, so although a few things are still broken, we can now be confident that they will end up all mended. Meanwhile the dreamsex is gorgeous, their clothes just magically melting away... mmm, a mental image to conjure with...
I don't care how long it takes, I'm sticking with this story right to the end!
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Obviously, when I'm on I write like a fucking demon! When I get blocked, I look at what I've already written and wonder how any human could manage to even come up with that many words.
I hope you feel inspired soon because that teaser you gave us... Where's my banging stick?
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