So glad to have another chapter, I love this story. I had a crummy day at work and this really cheered me up. I loved Vince's description of the Graduate, ha ha ha.
I decided to stay inside and read this while my family went swimming in the Mediterrenean and I think it was one of the best decisions I've ever made.
Everything about this is wonderful - bringing back my favourite fictional lesbians of all time was an especially cheeky bonus. Howard's resignation to evil!Vince was heartbreaking, as was Vince's reaction to the Gideon dream, but they trust each other enough now not to just let it fester away. Your subtlety is astonishing.
Yay, I'm back online and you put up a new chapter while I was gone - thank you, this is wonderful! I'm so pleased Sally and Kylie are still together, even though there are clearly some issues they still need to work out (I love your understated way of conveying the different ways in which they see certain things!), and that they're spending time with Howard and Vince in London. I'm looking forward to that museum tour when it finally happens. Meanwhile Howard and Vince have made so much progress, although things still aren't perfectly perfect... poor Vince making a mistake with his hair colour, that made me laugh and sniffle all at the same time. I'm glad the misunderstanding was sorted out, and that Vince isn't too tired to hear more about how much Howard loves his hair... I'd like to hear more about that too...
I forgot to mention this when I gave you my initial feedback on this chapter, but I LOVE the description/detail of Vince's "clothing chair," because... I usually have a clothing chair, more often than not, and I have tipped it over in similar circumstances more than once. It's very fitting for the character, and it made me smile
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So glad to have another chapter, I love this story. I had a crummy day at work and this really cheered me up. I loved Vince's description of the Graduate, ha ha ha.
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And I absolutely love Sally and Kylie, they are adorable.
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Everything about this is wonderful - bringing back my favourite fictional lesbians of all time was an especially cheeky bonus. Howard's resignation to evil!Vince was heartbreaking, as was Vince's reaction to the Gideon dream, but they trust each other enough now not to just let it fester away. Your subtlety is astonishing.
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