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nedae December 4 2009, 20:44:34 UTC
sounds interesting.
really, I want to read more :3

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conclusivelead December 4 2009, 23:41:10 UTC
Thank you so much! Once Chapter One has been edited, I'll post it in two parts. :3

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nedae December 5 2009, 09:30:53 UTC
awsome!
can't wait :D

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andimuffin18 December 5 2009, 00:49:01 UTC
OMG OMG OMG!!! *flails* I WANT MORE!! I NEED MORE!!! *cough* *clears throat* I mean....uhhhh...please?? This is a phenomenal prologue!! The pace was so fluid and effortless. The story grabbed me right away. It didn't have any uneeded or in your face cliche's or overexaggerated characters. It's so refreshing to see a novel this well written. Your grammar and sentences are impecible and only add to the epicness that I'm guarunteeing this will be! LOL Thank you for posting!! *shews* No go forth and finish the next few chapters so I can have them! PLEASE? *puppy eyes*

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conclusivelead December 5 2009, 03:24:58 UTC
UWAAAAH. *also flails* You just made my day. You don't even know. ♥♥♥

I've got about 5 chapters completed (something like 85 pages in Word) and I'll be uploading them in two parters as my beta gets around to it. THANK YOU SO MUUUUUCH. *dies*

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andimuffin18 December 5 2009, 06:17:54 UTC
85 PAGES!?! You just became my HERO!!! lol Mine is only30 pages on word and it took a lot to even get that far!

Two parters sounds GREAT!!! I'll be waiting!! *GRIN*

*sits and waits patiently*

P.S. Oh! and *revives* Can't have you writing more if you're dead lmao

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conclusivelead December 5 2009, 06:23:26 UTC
:D

Just for the record, I'm nosy and investigated your userpics. I must say - SUPERNATURAL AND BATMAN AND LEAVING ME EPIC REVIEWS ON A SHORT LITTLE PROLOGUE? You are my new favorite person.

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hpstrangelove December 5 2009, 02:31:33 UTC
Well your summary grabbed me right away - I'll do my best to keep up with posts and comment. I normally fall behind, but eventually catch up.

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conclusivelead December 5 2009, 03:23:35 UTC
I totally understand; I always fall behind, too. I'm glad you're intrigued, though, and I really appreciate your taking the time to leave a comment! ♥

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burntcrumpets December 5 2009, 07:53:54 UTC
Now this sounds like it will be an epic story!

Just from the Prologue, i can tell it is very well-thought out, fleshed out characters that will keep me entertained and a rich world that is calling out to be explored.

Can't wait to read more!

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conclusivelead December 5 2009, 08:09:44 UTC
Wow, thanks! :D ♥

I'm so glad you like what I've got posted so far! Hopefully, I'll be able to update by this time next week, so please be on the lookout!

I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment!

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empty_room December 5 2009, 12:51:05 UTC
Would love to read more. :D

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conclusivelead December 5 2009, 21:32:58 UTC
♥ Would love to have you read more. :3

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