Delicious: Parts o9 & o1o - FINAL CHAPTER

[conclusivelead]

Title: Delicious
Author: conclusivelead.
Pairing: Dean/Sam
Burton Movie: Charlie & the Chocolate Factory.
Rating: R - NC-17.
Category: Angst, drama, darkfic, romance
Word Count: o9 & o10 - 4,725.
Spoilers: None; AU.
Summary: “There is a smear of dark on the back of his hand and Sam wants nothing more than to lean forward and place his lips against

Comments

[calijirl5150]

Wonderful ending - but ya know this needs a minimum an epilogue. Psssssssh this needs to become a verse !!

Saved to memories :D

[conclusivelead]

Uwaaaah! Thank you so much! If I continue to recieve such positive feedback, I may actually continue to write in this universe. ;_; Your comment brightened up my day!

[jenken]

AHH! I've been looking forward to this for ages. I'm sorry I never commented before to compliment every single awesome chapter. I've been reading since the beginning. It was during crazy school times, but now that I'm on vacation, I can comment.

This, all of it, was AWESOME. I love it and the build up and your writing is beautiful. I love the idea, as crazy as it is. I even read some of it out loud to friends in my dorm room.
But yes. Great job again. Absolutely loved it. It's been pretty much the only reason I've been checking dean_sam during school/finals, and I'm glad I got to just sit back and enjoy the last chapter without school interfering.
I appreciate all the work you put into writing it. It's become one of my favorites!

[jenken]

And seconding the epilogue idea above. I would totally read more if there was more. Or more crazy movie crossovers.

[conclusivelead]

@_@ You are my hero. Seriously. Your comment made me want to cry. I put so many late nights and effort into this story that it's...I dunno, I just can't tell you how gratifying it is to hear that my silly little crossover made someone so happy.

I'm seriously considering writing an epilogue, and I'm also considering writing some oneshots that take place inside the same universe.

I hope you don't mind if I friend you; you're my favorite person right now. ♥

[jenken]

Oh no, no crying! I know you hadn't received too much response from it, so I'm glad I came out of the woodwork to let you know. I know how gratifying it is to receive really positive feedback from fan work. Glad to help!

Friending is totally fine with me, and I'll add you back! My journal isn't all that interesting really but it's summer so more fan art and drawing in general should get up there soon I hope.

Looking forward to more! :D

[conclusivelead]

x3

♥

[ssfladysb]

Wow I waited for this to be complete and read in one go, intense. The whole underlying darkness of the fic captured me from the start, I needed to see how far Dean would push and if Sam goes along with him. But from the first moment they meet the extreme longingly all while slowly killing off the rest of the party so f'd up and I loved it.

I would love to know how Dean found his Sam, did he notice that lonely sweet boy who would stare longingly at his factory every day. Yes another begging for at least and epi. Truly lovely thanks for this.

[conclusivelead]

You read the entire fic in one day?! Jeez, you deserve a medal or something! x3 I'm so glad you liked how dark it was. I can do lighthearted stuff too, but dark fics seem to hit home a lot better. They leave a more lasting impression, anyway.

Haha, with so many requests, I'm definitely going to have to write an epilogue. I'm actually thinking about writing a shortish one shot in which we see Dean become obsessed with Sam and come up with his plan of getting Sam into the factory.

Once I've got my creative juices flowing again, I'll get started on the epilogue, so whatch out for it. :3

Thanks for the commentary, it made my day. ♥

[blood_ecstasy]

I ADORE THIS!

*dances around*

Thankies for finishing it darling.