Delicious: Parts o3 & o4

[conclusivelead]

Title: Delicious
Author: conclusivelead.
Pairing: Dean/Sam
Burton Movie: Charlie & the Chocolate Factory.
Rating: R - NC-17.
Category: Angst, drama, darkfic, romance
Word Count: o1 & o2 = 1,397.
Spoilers: None; AU.
Summary: “There is a smear of dark on the back of his hand and Sam wants nothing more than to lean forward and place his lips against

Comments

[conclusivelead]

Thank you so much! <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[conclusivelead]

:3

<333

[blood_ecstasy]

I like it. :)

The last part made me very happys. Only problem is part the time I imagine grown up Sam and part the time I imagine child Sam. >_

[conclusivelead]

Well, it's more a comprimise. :O Sam is about seventeen in here. So he's kinda semi-adult and semi-child. <3

[bhbear06]

Those were some great chapters.
Lilith is so crummy, I mean what kid wouldn't be excited to go on a mysterious chocolate factory tour.
I loved Sam's and Mr. Winchester's interaction. It's like love at first sight.
<3

[conclusivelead]

Thank you!

Lilith is totally a little brat. I want to kick her in the shin. She gets worse, if you'd believe it.

Thanks! I worked really hard trying to keep the interaction between them not-too-heavy but still obvious, ya know? :O

♥

I hope you liked them. ^_^

[120cassie]

I am loving this.. The way you've written this , the story hasn't lost it's wonder..

I'm guessing Sam is quite a bit younger than Dean in this.. There is some really beautiful writing here, like how you set the scene and also Dean and Sam's first meeting.. It's believable how you show the interest and the sort of loveatfirstsight stuff without being sappy about it and keeping it subtle..

Looking forward to more :)

Hugs
Julie

[conclusivelead]

D'aw, SHUCKS. :D

Your comment just made my day. Thanks for continuing to read! The next chapters, if you're interested, will be added on Tuesday. ♥