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sgnt_caitsy August 17 2010, 12:20:02 UTC
AHHH MAAHHH GAHHHHD! nnguuughh

“Well, it was a little painful to listen to,” Eames shrugged, quickening his step to pass them and digging for the key to their rented car in his pocket, “But it was a good sort of ‘ow,’ not a bad one.”

You should have seen my face when I read that bit - FFFFFF I LOL'D BUT THEN I WAS LIKE 'DAYYUMMMMMMMM OH NO HE DI'INT' OHH GOD IT WAS REALLY HOT THOUGH.

This was incredibly tender and beautiful and just lovely.

LOVED IT! : D

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concinnity_blue August 19 2010, 18:12:54 UTC
Thank so so much! I'm thrilled you liked it!

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nevcolleil August 19 2010, 18:06:27 UTC
This is fantastic :) Starting out, I wasn't aware that the couple was established so I was pleasantly surprised when it became clear that Arthur and Cobb had been together before. It's refreshing to see a sex scene where both partners aren't perfect porn-quality lovers :p I love Dom all the more for accidentally using teeth and being bad at gauging things like volume and time :p And the line at the end! So Eames! What fun wordplay. Brilliant :D

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concinnity_blue August 19 2010, 18:18:17 UTC
Hahahaha, thank you!

I actually think that first point is a mistake, more than anything. I wrote this fic in two separate chunks, and Dom's behavior isn't really consistent between them, so yeah. Apologies for that, it wasn't all that clever of me! XD I should probably go in and bring it all in line, but I have loads of trouble writing pre-established-relationship Dom and Arthur without making it into a serious angst-fest. This was the compromise.

And my betas were teasing me that I didn't write them both as ~*~masters of perfect sex, always~*~, so I'm glad to hear that someone liked that.

Thanks!

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panda_ne August 21 2010, 23:24:29 UTC
Hahahaha, you're a genius. I mean, I knew it but now it's like... a fact written down in books. I've come to love you lots xDD

It was all so natural and fun to read, very in character too. I loved that Arthur brought his own iron, I totally see it happening, haha. Genius, srsly.

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