“Well, it was a little painful to listen to,” Eames shrugged, quickening his step to pass them and digging for the key to their rented car in his pocket, “But it was a good sort of ‘ow,’ not a bad one.”
You should have seen my face when I read that bit - FFFFFF I LOL'D BUT THEN I WAS LIKE 'DAYYUMMMMMMMM OH NO HE DI'INT' OHH GOD IT WAS REALLY HOT THOUGH.
This was incredibly tender and beautiful and just lovely.
This is fantastic :) Starting out, I wasn't aware that the couple was established so I was pleasantly surprised when it became clear that Arthur and Cobb had been together before. It's refreshing to see a sex scene where both partners aren't perfect porn-quality lovers :p I love Dom all the more for accidentally using teeth and being bad at gauging things like volume and time :p And the line at the end! So Eames! What fun wordplay. Brilliant :D
I actually think that first point is a mistake, more than anything. I wrote this fic in two separate chunks, and Dom's behavior isn't really consistent between them, so yeah. Apologies for that, it wasn't all that clever of me! XD I should probably go in and bring it all in line, but I have loads of trouble writing pre-established-relationship Dom and Arthur without making it into a serious angst-fest. This was the compromise.
And my betas were teasing me that I didn't write them both as ~*~masters of perfect sex, always~*~, so I'm glad to hear that someone liked that.
Hahahaha, you're a genius. I mean, I knew it but now it's like... a fact written down in books. I've come to love you lots xDD
It was all so natural and fun to read, very in character too. I loved that Arthur brought his own iron, I totally see it happening, haha. Genius, srsly.
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“Well, it was a little painful to listen to,” Eames shrugged, quickening his step to pass them and digging for the key to their rented car in his pocket, “But it was a good sort of ‘ow,’ not a bad one.”
You should have seen my face when I read that bit - FFFFFF I LOL'D BUT THEN I WAS LIKE 'DAYYUMMMMMMMM OH NO HE DI'INT' OHH GOD IT WAS REALLY HOT THOUGH.
This was incredibly tender and beautiful and just lovely.
LOVED IT! : D
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I actually think that first point is a mistake, more than anything. I wrote this fic in two separate chunks, and Dom's behavior isn't really consistent between them, so yeah. Apologies for that, it wasn't all that clever of me! XD I should probably go in and bring it all in line, but I have loads of trouble writing pre-established-relationship Dom and Arthur without making it into a serious angst-fest. This was the compromise.
And my betas were teasing me that I didn't write them both as ~*~masters of perfect sex, always~*~, so I'm glad to hear that someone liked that.
Thanks!
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It was all so natural and fun to read, very in character too. I loved that Arthur brought his own iron, I totally see it happening, haha. Genius, srsly.
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