Tales of the Abyss - Tiphereth 6

[meimi]

Just a short reminder: This is NaNo (regardless of my mother harassing me to the point where I can't get anything done >_<), so there are going to be errors. Boatloads of errors. Feel free to point them out, but don't expect me to come back and fix them anytime soon unless there's something major (like OOC, or screwed up history, blahblahblah).

Comments

[anonymous]

Yey moar fik!
Liked it a lot. Especially angsty Asch, but even more especially I-really-do-hear-voices-in-my-head-and-I-actually-kinda-like-them Luke. I'm a sucker for anything dealing with their mind-bond-thingy. And yey! for Guy and Jade, too.

[darkpsycho1000]

aljsdklfjalksdjkfjkdjf <3 I swear I'm going to be one happy idiot throughout nano. Every chapter just makes me grin and grin and grin and I don't even know, I should just be shot. Ouchies for painful closing-off-ness though :< I wonder how Asch is doing on his side--though maybe it doesn't bother him as much... I don't know. I never did catch if he felt pain too on his end in the game D| ... lol, it took until Luke was saying something about how Guy was fine until Nephry shielded those kids that I finally got what he was probably upset about lol... *sloooow*
Anyways. Waaah good writing as always /o/ *worships meimism more*

[darkpsycho1000]

Yeah! I wasn't the only one that was "hur?" at Guy's issue. Luke's clingy moment was cute. It reminded me of Yuuhiya's doujinshi "Echoes".

/lurk

[hikari83]

Hehe. I take it back. Yuuhiya's 陽なたのほし had a more appropriate scene.

[darkpsycho1000]

LOL LMAO XDDD THE MENTAL CLINGINESS IS GO <3

[nachte]

Your Luke and Asch just fills me with love~~~~!!!! Go Luke and charge head first like you always do and drag it all out of Asch~ Oh, he loves his original so~ ♥

Score: Luke 1 Asch 26... until Luke figures out some "tricks" to use on Asch. *cough*

[qable]

I found the first part of this story in May of '08, and have reread it a couple times since then. It's a very nice AU, and I like how the entire party is represented in the story, along with several important NPCs. I look forward to seeing how Asch and Luke handle the issues surrounding their father, as well as finding out how Van managed to be in two places at once.

I believe "Please write more" is in order. Thank you for your work.

[renuki]

Hrm. Intersting, I do say. (D: Poor Guy and Asch.)

The part with Arietta was freaking awesome. :D (TERIBBLE AMUSE THAT ASCH LIKE CUTE THINGS! XD)