Short Story Time: "Use By"

[computer_boy]

Comments

[xandri]

Oh man, that's brilliant! XD I love it! So cute and charming. You already know all my criticisms.

Because I'm a nitpicky whore. >_>

[computer_boy]

Thanks, and your comments are helping me polish this and any future work I do. :)

[xandri]

You know I'm'a wanna read it! :D

[lizamanynames]

I already gave you my rundown on this, but I just wanted to let you know that upon reading it for the second time, my reaction is still: LOL!!!

[computer_boy]

I'm glad it was worth a second read! :D