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[fanfiction] Stole the Whole Night

Dec 21, 2011 13:41

Title: Stole the Whole Night
Author: comptine
Rating: K (harmless fluff and arguing)
Prompt: 'can't take my eyes off of you' @ What the FrUK
Warnings: None~
Notes: Based on this picture by starrdust411
Summary: With the holidays coming around, Francis and Arthur share a quiet night in the library together.

( and it will be forever yours )

oneshot, gift/request/contest, fanfiction, pairing: fruk, fandom: axis powers hetalia, gakuen!shit, france, rating: k, england

Comments 10

lost_hitsu December 21 2011, 20:49:23 UTC

For unknown reasons, I'm usually not very fond of highschool AUs, but I enjoy the really good ones all the more. Your writing style is easy and captivating as always and their banter, just as the fluff, were simply perfect.

comptine December 30 2011, 03:36:50 UTC

Haha, I'm usually not too big a fan either, but I really just wanted to write something like this and boarding school was the first thing that popped into my head! And thank you so much /;u;/ you're such a sweetie!

mikkary_bones December 21 2011, 22:01:26 UTC

Bwahhhh this was amazing and so cute! I love the simplicity of their relationship -- I mean, it's not simple at all, really, but it is approached (by the characters and the writers) as something quiet and understated and I can't really quite put this feeling across in words. But I loved the fic! I especially loved the image of the two of them sitting alone in a quiet library with the snow falling. That was sweet. (:

comptine December 30 2011, 03:38:02 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm glad it came off as simple because that's what I was going for!

starrdust411 December 21 2011, 23:53:19 UTC

Yay! I inspired someone :D And the fact that this fic is so cute makes me extra happy. I love the little note at the end, it was a nice little tag on, and I like the comfortable-awkwardness between them. It was all very well done. :)

comptine December 30 2011, 03:38:14 UTC

Yes you did! Your picture was just wonderful <3

fireblazie December 22 2011, 03:24:30 UTC

Aww! This was warm and fluffy and all sorts of good things. I loved the nice, simple, quiet atmosphere. And Arthur knitted him a scarf! I love these two so much.

AND THAT ENDING. Oh, okay, Arthur, and what'll your excuse be when it's July? :P

comptine December 30 2011, 03:38:48 UTC

Arthur will say that Francis is very cold at night and that they will just have to sleep together to keep cool :>

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Re: so cute!!!! comptine December 30 2011, 03:39:07 UTC

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