[fanfiction] Risqué - Memoirs of a Prussian Defence 6/6 -complete-

Apr 17, 2010 06:55


Title: Memoirs of a Prussian Defence 6/6
Author: twilightrose2
Genre(s): Romance/Humor
Rated: T
Summary: If Gilbert was ever going to write a personal memoir, this is exactly where he would start. With a concerned Canadian standing over him, an angry Brit yelling from the stands and his voice utterly gone. Pru/Can and FrUK
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series: memoirs of a prussian defence

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orangepencils April 17 2010, 15:14:32 UTC
ohhh! ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! its overrrrrrrrrrr! But it had hockey in it so yay! And it had both prucan and fruk in it so that made everything just soooo much more awesome!! <3<3 and the song lyrics were <3 and the whole thing was kjesdfn kwjerhnik! and the ending was simply wonderful!!

BRAVO! Looking forward to the next one <3

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comptine April 23 2010, 14:56:09 UTC
Yep, of course there'd be hockey in the end~ and that song was silly and written at 3am so good to hear XD

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futuresimple April 17 2010, 16:59:58 UTC
Pfft I don't even ship them but this fic is just too cute :'D ♥ Loved it~!
And the FrArt scene - dawwww ;w;

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comptine April 23 2010, 14:56:35 UTC
It's funny ship to read all on its own <3

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sutekikage April 17 2010, 17:00:09 UTC
AHHHHH <3 <3 <3 You're writing one for Mattie?! :D ILOVEYOU <3 <3 <3

Also, this was purely as awesome as Gilbert was <3

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comptine April 23 2010, 14:56:53 UTC
Yes, and it involves pot brownies.

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allyoucaneater April 17 2010, 18:30:14 UTC
dude, remind me to comment here more often.

I have a fever and I should be resting but fff you made me want to post here! Ahaha, Gilbo quir the team but he won his prize~

Also, the Fruk scene, so adorable >w<

okay time to rest *crawls to bed*

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comptine April 23 2010, 14:58:02 UTC
OMG, DUDE. You should comment here more often.

lol fanfiction is way more important than getting healthy!

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darkheart510 April 18 2010, 00:14:53 UTC
This was so amazingly cute and Gilbert's surprise goal was awesome. It's like one of those miracle moments you only get once in a lifetime. I loved Francis' parting shot, although I still don't get the significance of creamy dill. ^^ii

I can't wait to see the Ludwig-centric one!!

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dgraytard April 20 2010, 00:51:43 UTC
OAO itss overr it was so daum cuute !!!! but i have a question, can u explain to me about the creamy dill pickles??? im at loss because of that- i dont understand wat it means

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darkheart510 April 20 2010, 03:40:58 UTC
She used it in chapter two: Sucking cocks are for people who like the crisp flavour 'creamy dill'

Which is a hilarious line, but I don't get why oral is connected with creamy dill, tho. So I can't help you there, hon.

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comptine April 23 2010, 15:04:01 UTC
Okay, replies to the "creamy dill" bit XD

dill = phallic imagery.
creamy = -coughsemencough-

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