[fanfiction] Risqué - Memoirs of an English Busboy 2/3

[comptine]

Comments

[luciole_solange]

-squirms- My god- I think I'm in love ~~<3

You took my little pathetic restaurant and made it awesome and made this story awesome and just- just- ARG.

T_T I adore this story so hard.

-rolls around- I- I can't wait for... Francis... to try more- with Arthur just... URG

Can you tell you've made me pretty incoherent?

[comptine]

XD your restaurant was far from pathetic! I loved Risque <33

yep, Francis isn't done playing with his busboy~~~

[futuresimple]

I did not comment on the first part since I couldn't access the internet at the time I read it, so my general opinion so far is absofuckinglutely thumbs up :D You're bloody gifted at writing AUs, they're really good! I'm lovin' the whole crew, each character is well written and the story is brilliant and funny /;w;/ I wish it had more parts, ehehe~;; though I can't wait to see the ending!

Your icon suits Risqué!Arthur lol

Oh and I ttly forgot to add: I love the narrative at the beginning of this chapter! Kind of reminds me of Moulin Rouge lol don't ask me why. idefk. The style is quite nice and is pleasant to read:D

[comptine]

Eeee, thank you very much! I love writing them so... <3 And it will get more parts, but less focus on Francis/Arthur and more on everyone else I'm managed to wedge a part into this 'verse.

lol Moulin Rouge? how.. . odd XD

[insanityin3d]

Very cute! I liked this one, especially the last bit with the three of them talking about the band, and of course the adorble hug there, too. X3

Can't wait for chapter 3~!

[comptine]

XD The Pathetic Trio has become some of my favourite three to write~~

[comptine]

<3 Pathetic Trio just doing anything together is my headcanon XD

[comptine]

<3 who doesn't love them~?