Comments | comptine: [fanfiction] Divine Intervention 6/9

comptine

[fanfiction] Divine Intervention 6/9

Nov 30, 2009 04:33

( Francis realizes that things are changing and that he can't do anything to stop them )

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jasminelau November 30 2009, 12:43:34 UTC

ahhh! You are starting to make me like onesided! Prussia/France now! D':
Wonderfully written and had the tone of finality. Really sweet also. (:

comptine December 2 2009, 16:36:36 UTC

It's very interesting, isn't it? Someone else pointed it out a few chapters ago and I couldn't help but prompt the romance a little~

nym_aulth November 30 2009, 12:50:58 UTC

*squee*
Yay! Another chapter!

I love all of this fic so much ♥ You write the best FrUK!

comptine December 2 2009, 16:36:56 UTC

<3

Thank you very much :DDD

ykyapril November 30 2009, 14:16:10 UTC

Oh no, is this going to end soon?! There's just one item left on Artie's list!!! On the other hand, I can't wait to see Francis realizing that he loves Arthur, lol

Gilbo/Liz is my het!OTP too :DD

comptine December 2 2009, 16:37:49 UTC

Yep, only three chapters left~ Well, two and an epilogue. it will be exciting

It's because they just love to hate each other <333 AND THEY WERE CUTE AS KIDS

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comptine December 2 2009, 16:38:51 UTC

Yep, only one thing left on the list <3 And they will show up, near the end, but they will!

m_dono November 30 2009, 17:47:41 UTC

One of the things I like about this story are its sub plots. The shifts from Francis and Athur, to Francis, to Francis's friends, with other occasional bits and peaces there. It gives the story a larger world to be it--giving it the impression that anything can happen.

I wouldn't say it's what gives it its edge since that's something else, I'd say that it gives it its flavor c;

comptine December 2 2009, 16:40:26 UTC

Originally it just had one plot, but that's what I really like about how this story evolved to encompass much more <3 I love my subplots~

m_dono December 2 2009, 17:06:13 UTC

I'm glad that you're confident about if c:
Something I wanted to add BTW. I'm also very happy that even though there are subplots, you maintain the main perspective of the story--which is Francis'.

I don't all enjoying it when people make too many subplots that drift from the original focus because I feel that the author is making an attempt to cram more stories into one. This I find is a bad move because it means you may have not collected your thoughts to know what should've come first.

So, again, I am happy with how you right. If anything, I am verily impressed c: