[fanfiction] Divine Intervention 3/9

[comptine]

Comments

[darkheart510]

It's hard to type while sobbing and sniffling, but... *wibbles* This was just so sad. I'm glad you found the reason for Francis trying to commit suicide even though it's the saddest thing in the whole wide world, it adds a dimension to the story that it was missing before.

[comptine]

-gets out tissue box- I'm actually really glad I found a reason as well, you're right, it adds a whole other side of the story ^___^

[comptine]

:O Oh noes, see if I was at work and reading a sad fic I'd still probably burst into tears orz;;

the bad touch is no more =A=

[comptine]

oh noes, that one of my favourite lines~

[winnnner1234]

*sniff* That was really sad... Poor Francis T.T

Did you mean 'nose' when you wrote 'As Francis crinkled in his noise in disgust'? I didn't get that sentence... Sorry if I'm wrong though *gets shot*

[comptine]

I totally did mean that... -fixes- thank you~

[omgimsuchadork]

Wow. That is a sexy car. XD I can totally see Arthur driving that. :::trying not to focus on the sadness so she doesn't start crying again:::

[comptine]

O-Oh noes! -tissues-

[france_b]

Well... I've already told you how I feel about this chapter. But to further fluster you because it is rather fun to do ---

This chapter is amazing. The emotion that you manage to protray is absolutely astonding! The guilt and heartbreak are practically palitable. I have only cried to a small number of fics and you my dear friend- Have now been added to that list.

<3 now I am going to go cry. <3

[comptine]

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I don't know if I should be proud of feel bad for being added to that list XD;

[france_b]

Feel proud!!! <3 Your stories are amazinggggg~