Monday: What becomes of the broken hearted?

Jan 12, 2015 07:00

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Hello! My name is Drayce and this is my week to cause havoc... erm, post the prompts. Yeah, that.

In fan fiction, we get a lot of stories about the Happy Ever After bit even if they had to crawl over broken glass to get there. But what about when the course of true love ends up in a four car pile-up on the M4 ( Read more... )

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scribble_myname January 12 2015, 12:48:40 UTC
Gotham, Barbara Kean/Renee Montoya, wake up and walk away

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Fill (1/2) salmon_pink March 19 2016, 19:41:24 UTC
Contains mild drug use, exhibitionism, rough sex, rated NC-17It’s a hot summer’s night, and they’re well on their way to being drunk by the time the sun sinks over the horizon. Barbara watches the skyscrapers reaching up to the sky outside the open window of Renee’s apartment, endlessly tall buildings silhouetted by the glow, the city smog turning the prettiest shades of orange and pink ( ... )

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Fill (2/2) salmon_pink March 19 2016, 19:42:13 UTC
She fucks Renee slow, two fingers inside, her thumb stroking Renee’s clit so gently. Renee’s hips buck, try to push her faster, but Barbara draws it out as much as she can. Renee presses her lips together when she comes, her fist pounding down against the bed. “Why didn’t you cry out for me, baby?” Barbara whispers softly. “You know how much I love your voice.”

Renee just shakes her head, that frown back like it never left. She lies down, and it’s too hot to sleep in each other’s arms, but Barbara curls up against Renee’s side all the same.

She dozes, dreamless fits of sleep that leave her less rested than before. Renee rises before dawn, but Barbara closes her eyes, pretends to be asleep until the bathroom door closes.

She watches the sunrise out that same window, sat at the same counter they fucked on the night before, drinking cheap instant coffee while Renee showers.

“Take a sick day,” Barbara says with a smile when Renee steps out of the bathroom.

“God damn it!” Renee snarls, her palm slapping down beside the coffee Barbara ( ... )

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Re: Fill (2/2) scribble_myname March 21 2016, 03:18:53 UTC
Thank you! This is so awesome and so in character and so loaded with the best kind of tension.

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Re: Fill (2/2) salmon_pink March 23 2016, 07:18:50 UTC
You're so welcome! I only recently caught up with the new season of Gotham, so I was happy to have an excuse to write for the characters again. ;)

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