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Tuesday - Triplets, Tiads, Trilogys, Threesomes, Trios, and Trinitys

Jul 10, 2012 03:00

Morning y'all - once again I'm still your guest host for the week, natural_blue_26, and today's comment_fic is brought to you by the number three.

Pull out your hyphens, colons, semi-colons, and every other grammatical cheat code you have and prepare to abuse the heck out of them because today is three sentence fic day. Prompts can be whatever your heart desires, but the ( Read more... )

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with_rainfall July 11 2012, 07:32:24 UTC

Animorphs, David/Marco/Rachel, yellow

Re: FILL - Marco POV natural_blue_26 July 12 2012, 09:39:17 UTC

:DDD

Huh. Again possibly a regional thing, but I've always heard both listed together as a Step 1 then Step 2 thing? Hmmm... *ponders how silly a language English can be*

Thanks! Marco's a smart cookie, but I can't see him wanting to be implied to be 'chicken' sexually in the room, either.

FILL - David's POV natural_blue_26 July 12 2012, 03:37:03 UTC

She wouldn't look at him today, but she's far too proud by nature to admit (even to herself, probably) that she's not doing it; instead the sun-bleached golden strands of her hair that he had been temporarily been granted wordless permission to touch - like her occasionally claw-like fingers had been doing to their flesh only a few days ago - slink smoothly (like the predator she hides inside herself behind manicured nails and a wardrobe fit for Seventeen) over her shoulders, and the ends just barely curl under to kiss the soft swell of her hidden breasts ( ... )

Re: FILL - David's POV rattyjol July 12 2012, 04:09:53 UTC

adlskjasdfllsfd

you're amazing

this is amazing

this ot3 is amazing

And all that is only nine sentences holy crap.

Re: FILL - David's POV natural_blue_26 July 12 2012, 04:27:49 UTC

agjagjkagjioagiojagjar *throws confetti*

I am so very glad you like it! :DDD (You have good eyes- anything major errors or flipped words I'm too tired to see?)

Over-stuff, abused sentences you mean! Well, I know what I'm going to have to start prompting now ;) ;)

Re: FILL - David's POV rattyjol July 12 2012, 04:48:18 UTC

I didn't notice anything, but I do not mind in the slightest going back through it again.
Nnope. You're good. You're gonna post this to the comm, right?

Please do. :D

Re: FILL - David's POV natural_blue_26 July 12 2012, 05:13:53 UTC

Thanks bunches! *hugs*

I'm thinking of rating this... M? For implied adult things done by minors? Hmmm...

Re: FILL - David's POV with_rainfall July 12 2012, 15:56:50 UTC

"far too proud by nature to admit (even to herself, probably" applies to both Rachel and David, so of course David would pick up on her real thoughts. For some reason it strikes me as a rather Marco-ish observation to make as well.

but he was sure (or at least he wanted to believe)
Wait.. I'm not sure how he can be both at the same time. Is he certain or is it only wishful thinking?

and some particularly bratty, hormone-driven voice in one of the darker recesses of his mind had wanted to push, to prod,I.. I don't know, something about the way you phrased that - maybe "darker recesses of his mind"? - is so David. He strikes me as the mad acientist type, not in the sense that he's crazy (at least not yet) but that he wants to test the boundaries and go about exploring the darker parts of human nature. The same is true of Rachel, although probably not this early in canon: she's not as open to it IMHO ( ... )

Re: FILL - David's POV natural_blue_26 July 13 2012, 09:46:47 UTC

I'm all about the animosity here being because everyone looking at everyone else and being "That thing you do? I dislike it in me so I hate it even MORE in you." (Except for David, who possibly is so convinced he's MOA that he might not think like this.)

He strikes me as the mad acientist type, not in the sense that he's crazy (at least not yet) but that he wants to test the boundaries and go about exploring the darker parts of human nature. The same is true of Rachel, although probably not this early in canon: she's not as open to it IMHO.

Yes! Thank you! And that is pretty much exactly my head-canon also. :)

...He wants to be sure, but even David has some part of him that doubts he's the smartest badass in the room sometimes (mainly he ignores that voice) is kind of what I was going for.

Actually, I think it was anijen who mentioned that Cassie could've been good at manipulation, only she's such a goody-two-shoes in canon that we never get to see it.

This really stuck with me, too. *nods*

I have a feeling Marco would distance ( ... )

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