Friday Free For All

Oct 07, 2011 04:54

Here we are, back to Friday. You know what that means! Free for All...any fandom, any pairing, any prompt your crazy little mind can come up with ( Read more... )

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tigriswolf October 7 2011, 15:06:33 UTC
Supernatural, author's choice, the Winchesters and Henriksen are on an FBI team hunting down mass-murdering brothers Luke and Mike

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FILL (1/2) tigriswolf October 7 2011, 21:05:17 UTC
"We're the BAU. Yeah, that means Bad. Ass. Unit. For real, look it up."
"Shut up, Ash."
"Sure thing, Boss."

It’s their twelfth big case in thirty-four days, and that’s gotta be some sort of record, but Vic says, “Wheels up in twenty,” and everyone gets on the plane. They don’t get too tired to fly. They don’t get too tired to fight. They take their time-outs by turn and reluctant, and if one of them stretches himself too thin, the others engage in a little tough love. That’s what makes them so good. That’s what makes them the best.

That’s also what makes them sort of a nightmare to work with, not that Vic can say that the same can’t be said about himself. ‘Relentless’ makes for a damned good FBI agent, but not so good for a fellow passenger on a long flight. Or a parent. Or a spouse. So says Vic’s ex-wives. So says Dean’s baby mama, from what Vic can tell ( ... )

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FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) nevcolleil October 7 2011, 21:06:47 UTC
“Okay, Sammy. You look back over the profile. See what it changes if the religious elements of the scenes are just for show,” Vic tells his agent. He loves being the SAC, if only because no other authority seems able to get a Winchester to shut up ( ... )

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) ammcj062 October 7 2011, 22:37:21 UTC
Well this is absolutely amazing and wonderfully funny! Especially the concept of Victor trying to keep Team Free Will in line :)

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) nevcolleil October 8 2011, 18:14:05 UTC
Thanks :)

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) jagfanlj October 8 2011, 01:02:23 UTC
I see what you did there! ;P This is AMAZING! I like seeing the gang from Vic's POV. Although you did leave me hanging wondering about those wings and who (or what) is actually killing those people. O_O

Not that I'm pushing you for more -- I'm having fun playing out all sorts of different scenarios in my head. :DDDD

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) nevcolleil October 8 2011, 16:35:52 UTC
I'm glad you liked this :) The prompt says the team is looking for "Luke and Mike", so I assume the "unsubs" are fully human :p They create "wingprints" for their victims because they believe dead angels leave behind scorchmarks like we see on Supernatural. If the mood ever striked me I may come back to this :) Thanks for your nice feedback!

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) jagfanlj October 8 2011, 20:52:33 UTC
O_o Boy, am I slow on the uptake... I just realized what names tigriswolf used. Luke/Mike; Lucifer/Michael. *slaps forehead* D'OH!

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) tigriswolf October 8 2011, 04:54:18 UTC
That last line! Perfect.

Thank you so much! This is better than I anticipated.

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) nevcolleil October 8 2011, 15:15:16 UTC
I'm so glad you like it :) I wouldd have done more with it if I could. I hope you don't mind that my minds went straight to BAU when I started this :p

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) tigriswolf October 9 2011, 00:46:03 UTC

If you ever feel the need to return to this 'verse... I would love to see them find the mass-murdering brothers. Just so you know.

(And maybe the two other brothers, Gabe and Cas, who don't agree at all, but... castigate themselves for finally turning Luke and Mike in.)

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) jaune_chat October 12 2011, 09:05:35 UTC
Glee! This is awesome! I love how you translated their roles from outlaws to lawmen, and Victor keeping control of them all (one way or another) was great. I loved the extra-dysfunctional Criminal Minds vibe you have going!

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) e313 November 4 2011, 14:47:27 UTC
*glee* i LOVE this! and Victor's choise as the man in charge of the team is brilliant!

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Re: FILL (2/2) (Oops! Didn't log in on that last comment!) nevcolleil November 4 2011, 21:22:25 UTC
Thanks :) I loved Victor! I wish we'd get some new human characters like him.

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