Comments | commen_sense: Drabble: "Can't Control It" (Peter/Claire)

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Drabble: "Can't Control It" (Peter/Claire)

Aug 15, 2009 06:15

Title: Can’t Control It

Rating: R

Word Count: 498

Pairing: Peter/Claire, brief mention of Angela, Nathan and OC

Warnings: Incest, sexual activity

Spoilers: None, takes place in an AU timeline

Summary: It was the only time he allowed himself to lose control…

A/N: This is so crappy *facepalm* But who can fight when plot bunnies attack? Written for
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[fandom] fanfiction, [ship] peter/claire, tv: heroes

Comments 15

arinnaval August 15 2009, 13:25:05 UTC

Uh-oh... What we have here? I loved the ending! Keep going!

commen_sense August 15 2009, 13:29:27 UTC

what we have here is my pathetic attempt to write paire :P hahahah, but im glad you liked it :)

the_traci August 15 2009, 17:28:30 UTC

This isn't crap at all! I love angsty Paire, and you wrote it perfectly. Good luck in the challenge!

commen_sense August 16 2009, 03:40:42 UTC

thank you! :D I love angsty!paire too :D

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commen_sense August 16 2009, 03:41:11 UTC

hahahah thanks :)i hope you enter something this time round too :)

britnik2 August 15 2009, 23:18:36 UTC

Awesome little fic, nice work. P.S. am loving your LJ banner. ;)

fallenmagic August 16 2009, 07:06:25 UTC

Guh. Angsty + hot and it's Paire. Absolutely wonderful!

She started bringing home guys from college and he watched from the shadows as she fucked them on the living room couch at night.

That sentence kinda stood out for me 'cause of the words you used and the fact voyeur!Peter is wrong but all sorts of hot. Hee.

Good luck, hun!

commen_sense August 16 2009, 07:18:18 UTC

thank you :) and yes, voyeur!peter is wrong but totally hot :D good luck to you too ^^