merlin fic; those nights belonged to us

Aug 27, 2010 15:36

title; those nights belonged to us 
rating; pg-13
word count; 3,916
characters/pairings; merlin/arthur, gwen, morgana
spoilers/warnings; modern!au, slash, mild language
disclaimer; I do not the characters, everything is property of it's respective owners.
summary; It starts in kindergarten with a watch, Merlin's ears and a cookie.

a/n; first modern!au ( Read more... )

tv: merlin, [ship] arthur/merlin, [fandom] fanfiction

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commen_sense August 27 2010, 12:35:04 UTC
thank you so much bb! :D

thanks for pointing that mistake, i was actually a formatting error -Arthur smiled at him- was supposed to be there but since I don't have Word on my laptop yet I'm stuck with notepad and it's HELL trying to write/edit on it...*shudders*

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myfoolisheart August 27 2010, 11:15:44 UTC
commen_sense August 27 2010, 12:35:33 UTC
thank you! part 2 will come soon! :)

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kathkin August 27 2010, 11:49:24 UTC
This is really sweet. :)

Couple of things, though:

1. Your link is broken. I got here eventually but it took me a few tries.

2. Is this set in the UK? Because if so you need a Brit-picker, I think. I noticed a few typos as well.

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commen_sense August 27 2010, 12:37:03 UTC
thank you!

-i fixed the link, I think it was my sleepy brain that was the culprit :P
-as for the brit pick, I tried my best to keep to it but I think I should enlist for a beta in the next part. As for the typos, I've fixed them now. Thank you for pointing them out! :)

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electrifiedpie August 27 2010, 12:59:16 UTC
i love how melrin calls him arthur pen haha and i love how u wrote arthur and melrin when they first met how he was mean but merlin did those nice for him and &hearts and how arthurs the only one that gets ear pulling prevliges mwhaha omg and the way u wrote merlins attraction to arthur dhajsdghja so hott the star tek marathon lollll
and the end aghdjak arthur totally feels the same thuds i love there closeness in bed goneee
seriously this fic was friggin amazing so cute love love loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it!!!!!!!!!

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commen_sense August 27 2010, 16:53:02 UTC
aw, I'm so glad you liked it! :D I was a bit 'meh' about the amount of fluff in it but I'm happy to see it worked out well, thank yoooou! <3

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electrifiedpie August 28 2010, 07:08:57 UTC
u totally could have even turned it into a chapter fic u still can gone

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commen_sense August 28 2010, 08:56:09 UTC
i just don't think i have the amount of commitment for a chapter fic. and im not big for mutli-chap fics as it is... I much rather prefer one-shots/drabbles/or at the most, three parters...but I'll be writing more of this pairing, that's for sure! :D

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marvelpku August 27 2010, 13:25:09 UTC
MAY I say this story is SO Sweet and Cute and Warm AND Bloody gorgeous. I can not wait for part 2. Please give us the update soon, dear author. It is such fun to reading your great story. Thanks a lot indeed.

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commen_sense August 27 2010, 16:50:45 UTC
thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :) the update will be soon-sometime during this coming week.

thank you for reading!

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