Whoo, I love the setup and Dinah's last thought so much. :) Somehow that little sheen of sweat in the heat on Helena's collarbone is the most amazing little detail--they're both very much flesh and blood women and you make them come alive here. :)
Thank you so much for the lovely comment, it means so much! I have to admit, it was rather hot and humid here when I wrote this (but yesterday we had hail storms, go figure) so I had heat on the brain! XD
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