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May 10, 2011 23:04

Title: Laundry List of Your Imperfections
Fandom/Pairing: SHINee, Minho/Onew
Summary: Minho waits and watches for a chance he's sure he'll never get.
A/N: Written for ikui for Replay4Japan. She gave me the prompt The Other Man by Sloan.

( You know I wanna keep my distance / 'Cause it's happenin' anyway / He knows you're gonna drift apart / And there's nothing he can say )

challenge: replay4japan, group: shinee, pairing: minho/onew, fandom: kpop

Comments 25

mikaerayohiko May 11 2011, 03:57:37 UTC

:O beautiful T^T

the_suit_case May 11 2011, 22:34:04 UTC

Thank you!

ikui May 11 2011, 04:13:48 UTC

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the_suit_case May 11 2011, 22:30:21 UTC

: ) I'm so glad you liked it! I finished it days ago but was angsting over it, whether you'd like it or not, haha.

Your commenting skills are fine! : )

<3

jinkibumiminho May 11 2011, 04:33:51 UTC

Crying my eyes out.
This seems sooooo real. If anyone would have a girl waiting for them at home, doesn't it seem as if it would be Jinki?
The way you characterized Minho as stoic and realistic was just lovely.
I loved the little vignette about Onew in his mom's dining room.
Wonderful story. So sad.

the_suit_case May 11 2011, 22:33:53 UTC

Thank you for reading!

tinyscribbles80 May 11 2011, 05:03:24 UTC

I love this! T_T its gorgeous and definitely going to my memories ^^

the_suit_case May 11 2011, 22:34:21 UTC

: )) Thank you!

playingods May 11 2011, 11:21:30 UTC

this is absolutely so gorgeous. really. i love it!

the_suit_case May 11 2011, 22:34:35 UTC

Thank you for reading!