Microfilm et Folie A Deux (part two)

May 01, 2009 21:03

Title: Microfilm et Folie A Deux (part two)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Eddie, OCs
Warning: Mild Lanuage, Sex
Disclaimer: I don't own anything related to Watchmen...but I wouldn't mind if I did.
Author note: This is Adventure #3 and it is now April 1966. The title translates literally from French to Microfilm & A Madness Shared by Two) The Comedian is ( Read more... )

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tc_adventures May 4 2009, 00:01:14 UTC
Thank you. I was hoping it would be on some levels.

Glad that you think so...more is to come :^)

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bella_voisin May 9 2009, 08:25:47 UTC
This chapter was really good. I really like the way you write, especially for material like this (few can write scenes like that well I feel). Plus, I like the way you write the comedian; I think you do a great job on that also. Is it hard to write for him do you think?

I hope I'm doing this comment thing right, I've just joined LJ, so I have no clue what I'm doing *blushes*

=P.

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tc_adventures May 10 2009, 06:32:36 UTC
*blushes*

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and tell me. I enjoy writing about him very much. I just try to remember what I had read in the book and how I saw him projected in the movie and go with it. I'm always hoping I maintain who he is or how he would be.

You did all the right things. I would have replied sooner but I had had a busy day!

Thank you once again for taking the time to comment.

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bella_voisin May 11 2009, 05:00:48 UTC
No problem! I think it's nice for people to hear how their stories are going (especially if they are good like yours =P). Bah, it's so awesome you're writing a comedian story. There aren't many online, everyone seems to have developed a strange obsession with Rorschach XD.

The graphic novel is amazing, I love how JDM acted for the part too of course.

Heh, no problem about not replying, I didn't know if you would or not. And yay, I didn't comment something else by mistake :P.

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tc_adventures May 11 2009, 07:25:01 UTC
:) Yes, it is always great to get some feedback on a story. I think he's a very dynamic character. You're right there are not many ones online.

I like Rorschach but there is just something about The Comedian. I agree I think JDM did a really great job. I couldn't imagine seeing the character any other way.

I noticed you added me. I added you back. :^)

That is where I usually just post the chapters in the rougher form and version. Would you like to friend my regular journal? I can't promise to be the most exciting person or even that the writing in it up the quality that I try to put into my writing posts because I just relax, and unwind when I post there. That said I would love to have you as a friend there as well.

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