(fic) Come Pick Me Up

[comearound4tea]

Title: Come pick me up
Pairing: Boyd Devereaux / Kyle Wellwood
Rating: R
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction, it is untrue

Comments

[comearound4tea]

well thank you :)

[ljhockey]

You know this is my favorite kind of fic, don't you? I love the first encounters...the tension and experimentation without penetration. I think it is something that just isn't touched upon enough in fic. And I think it is just as erotic.

I like the little touches at the end...the pulling up of the blanket, and Kyle's sweats. It's really endearing and tender without being mushy and girly. Very nice touch!

[comearound4tea]

You know this is my favorite kind of fic, don't you? I love the first encounters...the tension and experimentation without penetration.

I didn't! I like them, I wanted this to be, just relaxed, them going along with each other like they do in everything else. Kyle pointing out things Boyd would do if only he knew about them.

I like the little touches at the end...the pulling up of the blanket, and Kyle's sweats. It's really endearing and tender without being mushy and girly. Very nice touch!
thank you :)

[absentaserpis]

I love this. I especially, absolutely love the way it opens with a conditional statement because it sets this mood of being so tentative. Of course the whole thing is gorgeous as usual.

[comearound4tea]

thank you so much! I am so pleased you saw that :)