Good Cookies: Prompt and Fill Post, Round Two

Nov 02, 2012 20:44

Good Cookie, definition: 1. Marine Corps Good Conduct Medal; 2. Generation Kill fanworks created for YAGKYAS. Can include short (under 1000 words) ficlets, drabbles, drawables, mixtapes, fanart, whatever!


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FILL: Yielding Center 3/3 templemarker November 6 2012, 05:39:44 UTC
When they part, Nate's eyes are closed, and Brad allows himself a gloating smirk. He did that. He does that. No one gets to do that to Nate but him, and by god Brad is a lucky fuck ( ... )

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impala_chick November 6 2012, 06:24:36 UTC
MEEP. So goddamn perfect. The details in this take my breath away.

"I have never not wanted to do this," Brad says before Nate can even finish speaking.
I definitely made an undignified noise when I read that. *G*

"I'll dignify you later," Nate says nonsensically, but with a hot look on his face that says he means it.
NNGGGG. Never has nonsense been so hot.

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templemarker November 7 2012, 02:21:09 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.

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accol November 6 2012, 15:01:07 UTC
So basically wedding fics are my crack, and this is close enough to that to make me squee. :)))) Totally made my morning!

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templemarker November 7 2012, 02:21:43 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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chemm80 November 6 2012, 18:13:45 UTC
Nate looks resolute, unafraid, but Brad knows that look. He made his home in that look.

I love that. And this whole thing. Lovely.

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templemarker November 7 2012, 02:22:17 UTC
Thank you so much. That was actually my favorite line too--something clicked when it was typed for me.

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fandomfan November 6 2012, 23:34:30 UTC
Oh! Oh, this is so lovely, and so what I was hoping for with that prompt.

I love how smitten Brad is with Nate in this. Holding the door for him (and especially looking stoic in the face of Nate's grin at his chivalry... that line rocks my socks) and smoothing his eyebrow and noticing how Nate turns into his hand and most most most especially being so gloatingly happy that he's the one lucky enough to get to kiss Nate senseless.

And I love how Nate is totally soothed by Brad. Brad's learned how to read Nate and handle him accordingly, and as with all things in his life, in this situation he does so extremely competently.

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templemarker November 7 2012, 02:24:02 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for an awesome prompt. :)

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templemarker November 11 2012, 19:10:53 UTC
Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it.

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dargai November 7 2012, 12:42:57 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH, THEY COME OUT OF THE CLOSET AT THE BIRTHDAY BALL!

This is so fantastic!

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fandomfan November 8 2012, 05:28:24 UTC
Ray will mock this for years.

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dargai November 8 2012, 06:01:11 UTC
And rightfully so. I suspect the PFC and corporal are going to have that same belated reaction after they've worked off their hangovers.

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templemarker November 11 2012, 19:10:04 UTC
Thank you! Hilariousness squared: I didn't even realize I'd written that until you pointed it out. /o\

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dargai November 12 2012, 01:30:13 UTC
It took me right til the end to realize it myself and then I cackled like a madwoman. :) it's lovely when your brain puts in subtext without you even knowing. Well done, brain!

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