I'm so glad you posted this. It's a dark look into Dexter and I really like the concept you were working with. I hope my comments/adjustments were helpful. I didn't want to take over your story so I tried to keep them more focused on specific wording, grammar.
Can't wait to see if you continue writing for this show!
I know you totally respected the way I wrote it, your help is always awesome, feel free to say anything you think would be helpful, I'm learning and I love to learn and your comments are always welcome. Especially if you feel that I'm OOC or what you would have developped if you think of something I missed...feel totally free, I trust you.
awwww you are a star for reading it, it makes my day!!!!! Thank you Audrey. I'm so happy that you recognized him, it was my biggest fear.
If I ever go on writing on the Show, maybe I could use your help as well, I know we both like the show the same way and it's always nice to talk about it through the process of trying to write something, would you be ok with it?
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Can't wait to see if you continue writing for this show!
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Especially if you feel that I'm OOC or what you would have developped if you think of something I missed...feel totally free, I trust you.
So, yes, thanks a lot cellmate.
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Thank you Audrey.
I'm so happy that you recognized him, it was my biggest fear.
If I ever go on writing on the Show, maybe I could use your help as well, I know we both like the show the same way and it's always nice to talk about it through the process of trying to write something, would you be ok with it?
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