fic: pioneers (lost)

[colourmayfade]

lost. summary: hugo learns. hurley and ben. post series finale. ~1,100 words. rated: g. for lostsquee, prompt: boss and soft.

disclaimer: not mine, not mine, not mine!

note: I wrote this last minute for the ficlet challenge at lostsquee and forgot about it until today, when the queen of the day at the luau prompted "The Future". I'm all out of creativity

Comments

[elliotsmelliot]

Wow! What a great epilogue. I loved how you developed the relationship between Hurley and Ben.

[colourmayfade]

Thank you! ♥ Hurley is so underappreciated but I think he's one of the most fun to write.

[hariboo]

Their times on the island is on the things I will always wish we had seen some off.

"Who's gonna be too hard on them now?" and Hurley's voice comes out like a whine, his hand wraps around Ben's wrist. -- feelings occurred.

[colourmayfade]

I read somewhere that there will be a cut scene from the finale about Hurley and Ben running the island on the s6 dvd, it might be just a rumor but it makes me SO excited for it to come out.

Feelings occur to me whenever the finale is remotely mentioned!

- sorry for the edits, lol, I couldn't get this comment right.

[aetenae]

Oh, girl. This is exactly how I picture them in the island. Of course Hurley's gonna be the good, peaceful one and Ben's gonna get a little mad about that.
And I love that his ghost doesn't linger.

[colourmayfade]

Haha, I really think Hurley will run the island much better than Jacob did, he's so kind. I'm glad you liked it. I have a little gift for you, coming soon. ;)

[aetenae]

You have? Awww, you're too sweet. I'm trying again to write something for the spy!fic and the crossover. I really want to finish the second!

[valhalla37]

Oh my gosh, I just love this -- other than really enjoying the idea of Hurley taking over Jacob's role, I wasn't too intrigued about what would have happened in canon, but this is so lovely and sweet and fitting for both of them (I love how you still have their battling dynamic, even though it softens over time).

Just really, really wonderful. Great job, hun.

[colourmayfade]

I don't know about being intrigued because the show so cemented the idea that the island's story goes in circles, that I just kind of imagine it with the same themes we saw throughout the show. But I was reeeeally happy with Hurley taking over Jacob's role, too.

Thanks! ♥