Only Just Begun (McFly) Fletcher/Jones - Part 02

[colourful_words]

Title: Only Just Begun
Author: coloured_dream
Part: 2/4
Rating: NC-17 (overall) PG-13 this part.
Genre: Romance, genderswap
Pairing: Tom/Girl!Dan (Flones!!)
Summary: Danny’s not sure there’s such a thing as a perfect man anymore. But maybe there is and maybe her perfect man has been under her nose the entire time.
Disclaimer: Not mine, nothing more than a work

Comments

[kay_borriefairy]

Oh my god!!

I do love a cliffhanger!!!!! Love how Danny asked Tom if he was in love with her, so cute.

Can't wait for more.

[colourful_words]

That was an unintentional cliff hanger as well; it just got cut like that in the edit. It make more sense to have the next part as one though, you’ll see why when I post :p

More soon!

[moya_1991]

I thought this whole chapter would of been about them fighting, then the next one dealing with them gluing things back together and then the bedroom for the last chapter:P how wrong was i? Great chapter! :)

[colourful_words]

The first time I wrote this it was more about them fighting, but it just didn’t sit quite right with me so when I re-wrote I cut that and changed it to this. The bedroom scene will be coming a little sooner than expected :) But there will be the aftermath for them to deal with, and whatever that might entail.

Thank you :)

[bfavre1]

Ha. About time Danny gets it.....
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

[colourful_words]

Hehe Danny’s not the smartest, but got there in the end though.

More soon!

[sezzlefcuk]

You out did yourself this chapter was better then the last and i'm sure the next will over shadow this one.
I loved how you discribed the kiss gave me little butterflies.

x

[colourful_words]

Oh why thank you :D
Hopefully the next one will, that's the chapter I’m most nervous about posting.

That’s a good reaction; I’m really pleased you enjoyed this chapter.

[colourful_words]

glad you think so :D Thank you!

I don’t think he expected her to blurt it straight out. She does bumble around but at least she got there in the end!