I like how this is open, I mean, the ending, I like how Danny's still unsure about the wings, how it's still hard for him, but he's got those boys with him, for him, so. It will be okay.
And I loved the talk with Dougie, oh, bless them. ♥.
I also liked the rhythm, and your descriptions were often really, really pretty. So it was a seriously awesome, I really enjoyed it. The only thing I'd point out is the change in POV (which mostly happened in the sex scene). But it's really nothing, compared to the amount of beautiful this was.
Yeah, it’s an open ending because I didn’t want it to be too definitive, I didn’t want them to just walk off into the sunset and live happily ever after. Even if things with Harry don’t work as he wants them too (why wouldn’t they, though?) he still has the guys, his solid support group.
Thank you for reading and the cc. I’m really glad you liked :) ♥
That was so amazing, really beautifully written and so real.
I love how their relationship isn't spoken outright, they just know that the other one will always be there and when the time is right, they will find the words to say it. It's slowly developing throughout the whole fic, that it feels right that they not just jumping into things or forcing them.
Not the best time of the morning to leave a review but my reading of this is fresh and I couldn't leave without commenting, so.
What struck me was I love the inclusion of the turquoise into the wings. I have no idea why exactly, maybe they kinda represent the chink of 'light'ness that happens for Danny at the end. Or a less than emotional/deep answer than that like...it sounds pretty? lol. Lovely.
I actually loved how you wrote Dougie and how him and Danny came to a resolution. His speech pattern was really believable. :)
And the knocking over the stuff in the bathroom - another favourite because it wasn't like a perfect moment. Seems like I grow more and more fond of those kinda moments. :)
Well done you, this is lovely. (and really...sophisticated? Your style and descriptions are top notch!) ♥
I feel really bad that it’s taken me so long to comment back.
I was dead against the wings being all white, it seemed to angelic and pure and the grey and brown just seemed kind of boring so hence the turquoise. For me it was more about them seeming pretty, made him (his wings) just a little unique in the end.
I’m glad that was believable. I’m was so unsure of writing their resolution, of writing how Dougie should react, what he should say.
I’m really happy, glad you liked. Thank you for reading and sticking with it :D
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And I loved the talk with Dougie, oh, bless them. ♥.
I also liked the rhythm, and your descriptions were often really, really pretty. So it was a seriously awesome, I really enjoyed it. The only thing I'd point out is the change in POV (which mostly happened in the sex scene). But it's really nothing, compared to the amount of beautiful this was.
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Thank you for reading and the cc. I’m really glad you liked :) ♥
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That was so amazing, really beautifully written and so real.
I love how their relationship isn't spoken outright, they just know that the other one will always be there and when the time is right, they will find the words to say it. It's slowly developing throughout the whole fic, that it feels right that they not just jumping into things or forcing them.
Thankyou for sharing this ♥
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Exactly! He’ll always have the guy’s support, Harry’s support, even if things won’t work out for them relationship wise.
Thank you for reading and commenting, it means a lot because I was quite nervous about this xD
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What struck me was I love the inclusion of the turquoise into the wings. I have no idea why exactly, maybe they kinda represent the chink of 'light'ness that happens for Danny at the end. Or a less than emotional/deep answer than that like...it sounds pretty? lol. Lovely.
I actually loved how you wrote Dougie and how him and Danny came to a resolution. His speech pattern was really believable. :)
And the knocking over the stuff in the bathroom - another favourite because it wasn't like a perfect moment. Seems like I grow more and more fond of those kinda moments. :)
Well done you, this is lovely. (and really...sophisticated? Your style and descriptions are top notch!) ♥
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I was dead against the wings being all white, it seemed to angelic and pure and the grey and brown just seemed kind of boring so hence the turquoise. For me it was more about them seeming pretty, made him (his wings) just a little unique in the end.
I’m glad that was believable. I’m was so unsure of writing their resolution, of writing how Dougie should react, what he should say.
I’m really happy, glad you liked. Thank you for reading and sticking with it :D
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