ONE-SHOT: Black & Red

[love_rockerkid]

Title: Black & Red
Ratings/Warnings: NC-17; female oral, masturbation, voyeurism
Characters: Sirius Black, Lily Evans, Narcissa Malfoy
Pairings: established Sirius/Lily, Lily/Narcissa
Word Count: 3,953
Note: This was written as a response to a prompt given by Jenna/aiseiri_47: Lily/Narcissa | Sirius is jealous. It's set in my AU head-canon in which Lily and

Comments

[aiseiri_47]

Hee, I knew it would help ease you into the pairing if you got to make it a bit of Sirius/Lily, too. >.>

I liked the touch of voyeur!Sirius, and I think you handled it really well (because I don't do the Blackcest, thing), and it made for a psychologically interesting addition. I also always right Lily as pursuing Narcissa, which is why I like reading other people take on the pairing, because it's nice to see it handled differently - it changes the entire dynamic, but it's still just as awesome. Thank you for actually coming back and writing/finishing this! :)

[love_rockerkid]

It's funny, though, because while it did make it easier for ME to believe, it also made writing it slightly more difficult because ... even when I write Sirius/Lily, Lily is always technically with James. But here, if I kept that mindset, then Lily would be cheating on James with Sirius and on Sirius with Narcissa ... it just got too complicated, so I just made Sirius and Lily a ~couple, lol.

I'm glad you liked the voyeur!Sirius bit; I wanted to show more of his jealousy without him being directly involved with them. And I, too, am not one for Blackcest, especially with Sirius [you'd have to bend his character pretty damn far for that to happen], but I did want to show a hint of it. Have his mind resist but his body react, so to speak. Thank you for saying I handled that well.

No problem, thank YOU for writing it! It was nice for me to challenge myself and to get out of my comfort zone. I really liked that, so thanks! And thanks for reading and commenting as well! :D

[sable_tyger]

okay, so! First thought: I personally wasn't a fan of voyeur!Sirius. I think it's just a case of different tastes, etc., so no worries!

ANYWAY OMG IT WAS SO WEIRD TO SEE HESITANT LILY. Usually in your fics she's aggressive and forward, which I dig, but I enjoyed this side of her as well! Narcissa has that effect I suppose~ And I laughed at the end when Lily was talking the Sirius--that was more her usual self. ;) LILY LET ME LOVE YOU. (How is it that I love every Lily you've ever written? (That sounds weird.) BUT IT'S TRUE.)

I think, especially for a first attempt at femmeslash (I've never written sexy femmeslash...you've got me beat ;D), that this was awesome and I definitely approve. WRITE MORE? Ah, I know you're working on Dear Prudence right now, don't mind me, do your thing.

[love_rockerkid]

Yeah, I don't know, I've always kind of been a fan of voyeurs for some reason and public sex, shit maybe I'll be an exhibitionist whenever I'm ~sexually active gasp, but I totally understand not liking it. Especially in this situation with the Blackcest and whatnot. No worries indeed! It's not everyone's cup of tea.

I KNOW. TRUST ME GIRL, IT WAS WEIRD TO WRITE HER THAT WAY. But it just felt right with Narcissa. IN ANY CASE, I LOVE THAT YOU STILL LOVED HER. IN FACT I LOVE THAT YOU LOVE ALL MY LILYS. XD

ahahaha yeah, sorry, I don't think there will be much fanfiction coming any time soon, but I don't know, maybe if I take a break? Or maybe with original characters. I'd definitely love to explore this a bit more. We'll see.

[sable_tyger]

Public sex is A+, of that I am a fan. ;D

And no worries, man, totally no worries whatsoever on the 'maybe not much fanfic anymore' front! Write what you wanna write. I just wanted you to know that WHATEVER YOU WRITE, I WILL READ, WHATEVER IT IS. :D

[love_rockerkid]

seriously though I really feel like someday I'll want to do it somewhere there's a chance we could be seen eeeep okay I'll stop sharing my sexual preferences now lol

YOU ARE THE BEST PERSON, KATE. THANK YOU. :D