Comments | colouredxchaos: 100 word drabbles.

love_rockerkid in colouredxchaos

100 word drabbles.

May 15, 2010 20:32

I'm going to post several 100 drabbles in this post, rather than give them each their own. These were all written for the SBBC's Monthly Activity for May.

Title: Tomorrow
Ratings/Warnings: G; None
Characters: Tonks
Pairings: Tonks/Remus [unrequited]
Word Count: 100
Note: Prompt - a bowl of ceral.

Disclaimer: All characters and things you ( Read more... )

character: gilderoy lockharte, character: lavender brown, character: nymphadora tonks, rating: g, character: james potter, character: lily evans, rating: m, length: drabble, warning: character death, fanfiction, rating: pg, genre: dark/angst, character: cornelius fudge, pairing: lavender/lockharte, genre: romance, genre: general, pairing: james/lily, fandom: harry potter, genre: humor, pov: third person, pairing: tonks/remus, warning: mild sexual content

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sable_tyger May 16 2010, 04:39:37 UTC

OMG I AM LAUGHING SO HARD AT LOCKHART/HIMSELF

LOL I HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW

These are awesome, dear. =) I love your drabbles, and 100 word ones are so difficult but you write them so well, with a nice balance of dialogue, description, action.

And I love the way you hint at the "larger picture" in most of these (the Fudge one is pretty straightforward, but the James/Lily one definitely shows peeks at the rest of the story without outright telling it, you know?). You don't do it so heavy-handedly that it's like "omfg I get it already, shut up now," but you reveal enough to make it interesting. =) ♥ ♥ ♥

love_rockerkid May 16 2010, 05:56:28 UTC

LOLOLOL I THOUGHT/HOPED YOU MIGHT ENJOY THAT. THAT ONE IS MY FAVORITE; IT MAKES ME LOL SO HARD. ONCE I GOT THE IDEA IN MY HEAD I JUST COULDN'T LET IT GO, EVEN IF IT'S NOT ENTIRELY 'APPROPRIATE' FOR MNFF. XD

Anyway, I'm glad you liked them, dear, and thank you so much for the compliments/this comment in general. I'm always so happy when you read/comment on my stuff. [HUGS] ♥.

sable_tyger May 16 2010, 14:49:44 UTC

LOL @ MNFF. THEY JUST DON'T APPRECIATE GOOD HUMOR.

love_rockerkid May 16 2010, 18:30:46 UTC

I KNOW, RIGHT? THEY JUST DON'T APPRECIATE GOOD ANYTHING.

But, it was in the SBBC, and Rachel lets me get away with such things. XD

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heliconian_julz May 16 2010, 09:58:52 UTC

LMFAO.

Oh Lockhart...

love_rockerkid May 16 2010, 10:05:10 UTC

LOL I figured since he was so in love with his own face ... XD

xaxredxrosex May 16 2010, 16:30:44 UTC

that last one . . . God, I have tears in my eyes. >.> lol. Anyway, they are all lovely, of course. I think my favorite is the James/Lily one. ♥ And of course . . . Lockhart/himself. hahahahaha. For the first one, I feel that the ending is a little too "cutesy." Does that make sense? >.> Like, there was this beautiful, strong, depressing emotion and then you tacked on a "happy" ending. Not that it was bad, of course, it wasn't, just cute. And I don't think that's generally what you're going for in your writing. *shrugs* I love them all, though! :D It's been far too long since I've read anything of yours.

love_rockerkid May 16 2010, 18:36:08 UTC

LOLOLOL I'm so glad everyone loved the last one, because I fucking love it. :D :D :D

About the first one ... yeah, I agree with you, for the most part. I don't much like it either. But, I needed more words, and I wanted to show that she wasn't going to give up, because we know she didn't ... in any case, it is rather random. It was the first thing that came to mind for the end, and my muse wouldn't let it go, so I just said, 'WTF?' and went with it. It may not be what I generally go for, but at that point it WAS what I wanted ... it just goes to show that I definitely, definitely, cannot execute fluff very well. LOL.

Also, I am so not surprised the James/Lily is your favorite ... ;)

Thanks for commenting! And I hope you come around more often. :D