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The Taste of Decadence (Prompt 008. Taste)

Apr 15, 2008 21:02

Title: The Taste of Decadence
Author: Me, coloured_dream
Part: 1/1
Pairing: Fletcher/Jones.
Rating: Hard R, maybe NC-17
Summary: Danny knew Tom liked to play safe, could count the times he’d lured the blonde out of his comfort zone and into something a little more risky on once hand.
Disclaimer: I own nothing except my sanity but that is questionable
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mcfly: prompted standalone, pairing: fletcher/jones, mcfly: rps, genre: romance

Comments 23

leathlin April 15 2008, 20:39:09 UTC

*is a melted puddle of Flones love*
This was so hot!

The warm summery breeze blew in through the open back door the alcohol he’d consumed and the heat of the delicious summers night made his head fuzzy and vision cloudy.
This line is my favourite,and I swear,I felt the breeze myself when I closed my eyes.
Your stories are always amazing written,and your Flones is just FTW!
(and I started to squee when I saw you posted,and squeed even more,if it's possible,when I saw the dedication:) )

coloured_dream April 16 2008, 20:41:43 UTC

Hehe *steps over the puddle of melted Flones love*

I’m glad you liked sweetie :)

Aw thank you *blushes*

♥

theellibu April 15 2008, 21:43:37 UTC

Chuckling, Tom picked up a piece of cubed melon lifting it to the freckled mans lips. “How about you shut up, Dan and put that in your mouth!”

“Ooer! Not the first time you’ve said that, is it? Just usually I’m on my knees in front of you.” Danny laughed huskily and pressed his lips to Tom’s pale-skinned neck, suckling softly on the skin.

Hehe! *grins*

That was sweet and hot, mhmm. There isn't enough Flones lately, so I really enjoyed that :)

*loves*

coloured_dream April 16 2008, 20:43:15 UTC

Flones is a bit of a neglected pairing really.

Glad you enjoyed it :D

♥

juddpoynter April 15 2008, 22:56:39 UTC

Ohhhh, pretty! &hearts~

I could easily imagine the warm breeze and everything. Hmm. I love it when summery stuff gets mentioned.

Oh and Flones smut? FTW ;)

coloured_dream April 16 2008, 20:45:18 UTC

The summery stuff makes me wish summer would hurry up. I hate cold weather.

Glad you liked :). Flones smut is one of my favourite to write.

<3

bffimagine April 16 2008, 00:45:23 UTC

Guh... Tomsexing makes me hot :)

♥

coloured_dream April 16 2008, 20:46:51 UTC

Hehe *cools you down*

That’s the reaction I was aiming for :)

fatal_labyrinth April 16 2008, 08:26:32 UTC

I love Flones!!!

This was awesome, but you do need to iron out some kinks - commas in the wrong place, the odd word not in context or missing a letter etc, but still a really hot fic :D

coloured_dream April 16 2008, 20:49:58 UTC

Glad you liked :)

And thank you for the cc. Grammar isn’t one of my strong points so it’s something I can work on.