Amazing. I loved this. I could almost feel everything Gerard was feeling because you described it so well. I liked how Bert wasn't too torturous, because in other fics I've read the whole tying up/dominating scenario turns really abusive and that's just not hot. But this was. It was nicer to read them as a couple experimenting together and trusting each other. More realistic in that sense too. I really enjoyed it.
Add a dash of harsh, unsatisfied arousal and a pinch of silence and Gerard has a recipe for insanity. Love that line.
I dig the way you write and I will be snooping in that writing journal of yours for more - so watch out. ;)
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I loved this. I could almost feel everything Gerard was feeling because you described it so well. I liked how Bert wasn't too torturous, because in other fics I've read the whole tying up/dominating scenario turns really abusive and that's just not hot. But this was. It was nicer to read them as a couple experimenting together and trusting each other. More realistic in that sense too. I really enjoyed it.
Add a dash of harsh, unsatisfied arousal and a pinch of silence and Gerard has a recipe for insanity. Love that line.
I dig the way you write and I will be snooping in that writing journal of yours for more - so watch out. ;)
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and hot of course.
fucking fantabulous.
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