Comments | colorstainedsj: Entry #6

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Entry #6

Jul 01, 2010 18:43

Title: Finding Nothing
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Kibum/Eunhyuk, with hints of Donghae/Henry, also involving the characters of Heechul, Siwon, Hankyung, Zhou mi, Sungmin, and Kyuhyun
Rating: PG-13
Genre/Word Count: Science Fiction; 9,777 words
Chosen Color and Words: White; nothing and everything, virginity, band-aid, black out, and bleach
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entry #6

Comments 6

joanc20 July 2 2010, 12:33:42 UTC

i love this, i absolutely adore this fic.
the setting, the plot, the Kibum/Eunhyuk which is odd for me but so cute. Kibum being chef. Sungmin being all tough. &&& the ShiHanChul, the feelings evoked from this; the suspense, the aww moments. i know this is barely constructive but i just love everything about this. GREAT JOB! *applause*

mearii87 July 2 2010, 17:36:16 UTC

OMG. UM. IT'S FIREFLY. /SCREEEEEAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I LOVE YOU DESPERATELY. I JUST THOUGHT YOU SHOULD KNOW THIS. OMG THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT AND YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE OF THIS. WHO ARE YOU SO THAT I CAN STALK YOU FOREVER.

Omg I'm at work and I just ignored everything and read it through and I just want to read and read and read again and al;dskfjd;lk;askdflkdl;askdsjf. DO MORE WITH THIS OKAY?

This makes me so happy.

blueberrybb July 2 2010, 19:56:11 UTC

THIS WAS SO AWESOME. I can't believe that's like almost 10,000 words because I wanted it to keep going on forever with the crew! Loved the way you wrote up the characters with such individualistic qualities. Amazing. This NEEDS to be continued XD

anisole July 3 2010, 01:20:01 UTC

This was an awesome read. I really liked the plot.

catskilt July 4 2010, 07:28:22 UTC

I really like this setting and I enjoyed the entire fic, the mystery you built up about Hankyung and his cryptic messages, Heechul, the crew, the suspense and friendship, everything :D It was fascinating throughout and ngl I am flailing so hard over the Kibum/Hyuk bits, because they are adorable and in love and Hyukjae being the ship's mechanic and having quarrels with his beloved ship is so cute. The scene where he was trying to say I love you was so bittersweet ;__; and then you make me laugh with the last bit where Hyuk is going on about the impudence of Kyuhyun messing around with his baby.

I would so like to see this fic continued, too :D It would be great to learn more about the crew, like what Heechul meant by Sungmin being lethal with a weapon but shooting from the back, and how Kibum and Hyuk got together, and just...everything! /flails!