promise of a lifetime - part 3

[colorless_ideas]

Title: Promise of a lifetime
Fandom: Twilight
Pairing: Quil/Claire
Rating: T for the themes, I guess. It'll probably change on later chapters.
Summary: Multi-chapter story sequel to my oneshot Just Breathe.

Comments

[sunnyzim]

Sorry, I pressed "post comment' by accident - the mistake is as follows:

He grabs a dirty hag and wipes his hands, waiting for her to continue.

Yeah...You might want to correct that!! The mental image it gave me was priceless and I literally have tears in my eyes right now!! But otherwise, this is good!

[colorless_ideas]

HAHAHAHA thanks for catching that typo. Just fixed it. ;D

[arion1986]

ZOMG I was on vacation and missed an update for this awesome fic?!

Anyway, I love it. Just like always. The last conversation between them is so bittersweet. Amazing job! >

[bendleshnitz1]

Aaww, I really wish you had continued with this story. It looks amazing and very promising :)

[nightfall_child]

second the comment above