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Sep 11, 2009 02:14

Title: Dancing With Wolves
Fandom: Twilight
Pairing: Jacob/Bella
Rating: T, maybe?
Summary: Bella can't dance and Jacob decides to teach her a few moves.

Thanks to thankthatstar for being ultimately awesome and beta-ing this for me. ILY, BB! ♥

what do you mean you don't dance? )

oneshot, fanfic, jacob/bella

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Comments 21

stretch September 11 2009, 05:56:06 UTC
EVERYTHING. IS. BETTER. WITH. DRUNK. BELLA.

I'm serious, we need to start a drunk!Bella appreciation club or something.

That being said, this was adorable. While I find the image of Jake clubbing...amusing, to say the least, I think you pulled it off. He certainly looks old enough to get them into a club. And it was all the right amounts of cute and sweet and kinda sexy and hilarious. I heartily approve :)

(AND WANT MORE DRUNK BELLA!)

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ssbailey September 11 2009, 13:15:49 UTC
I second that! Drunk!Bella appreciation community. :) haha.

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colorless_ideas September 13 2009, 21:30:55 UTC
Bella has so much potential, liquor just helps her let that out LOLOL.

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the_angry_pixie September 11 2009, 06:43:54 UTC
i agree with stretch. drunk bella is 31 flavours of awesome.

for some reason i cant picture either jake or bella in the club scene very well. but you pulled it off.

:D

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colorless_ideas September 13 2009, 21:32:25 UTC
Nobody could picture them in a night club, except for me? lol

I think it was one of bluesuzanne's stories that had a scene of Bella, Jacob and some of his friends at a bar/club thing and I guess for that reason I could always see them in a place like that.

I'm glad I could make you all see it, though! :D

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absterpuff September 11 2009, 07:15:07 UTC
I have to agree with stretch and the_angry_pixie up there. I love me some drunk Bella haha!! And her getting teased about it the next morning is always fun times ;)

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colorless_ideas September 13 2009, 21:32:45 UTC
How could Jacob NOT tease Bella after all that? ;)

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hazy_crazy September 11 2009, 07:28:00 UTC
Agreeing with the two above me heeehehe.

This was awesome! It's true that it's hard to imagine Jake OR Bella in a club, but you made it very realistic, and it seemed to work quite well *grins* Loved all the sexual tension. My that was hot *fans self* :P And drunk!Bella is just epicly brilliant :D

Guuuh I want a Jaaake *whines* lmao :P

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colorless_ideas September 13 2009, 21:33:11 UTC
I want a Jake, too! DDD:

Glad you enjoyed it!

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iluvpoto September 11 2009, 13:11:02 UTC
I love Drunk!Bella. It should of happened in the series, honestly.

OH A GIRL CAN DREAM.

I've never really imagined Bella and Jake in a club. But you've done a great job writing it out!

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colorless_ideas September 13 2009, 21:33:42 UTC
A lot should've happened in the series. And yes, drunk!Bella is on top of the list.

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