promise of a lifetime - part 1

Jul 13, 2009 02:29

Title: Promise of a lifetime
Fandom: Twilight
Pairing: Quil/Claire
Rating: T for the themes, I guess. It'll probably change on later chapters.
Summary: Multi-chapter story sequel to my oneshot Just Breathe.

part 1 )

promise of a lifetime, claire/quil

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kailorien July 14 2009, 03:47:27 UTC
What a great start! I've got a feeling that I'm gonna really like Claire. I'm already in love with Embry and your Quil intreagues me. I look forward to more. :)

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colorless_ideas July 14 2009, 15:54:11 UTC
Thank you! *hugs* I really like my version of Claire too, if I may say so myself! :D

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ssbailey July 14 2009, 04:31:33 UTC
Aww there so cute! :) Great start Cibele! *hugs*

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colorless_ideas July 14 2009, 15:54:55 UTC
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Sam! *hugs* There's more to come! And they really are very cute. <3

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itslikenature July 14 2009, 14:42:41 UTC
I'm at work, I see this, and I'm so intrigued that I actually peek and can't stop reading. This is so refreshing to read something that deals with other members of the pack. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more. ;)

Back home. Her family, her friends, her…

I know we all have our touchy spot about imprinting, but we know too that it had already happened to them so with that out of the way....she just couldn't fight it any longer?? She felt the gravitational pull to be back home with Quil??

“Who do I have to sleep with to have some service around here?”

I loved this line. It was, um, kinda sexy. Hehe

Quil’s exactly the same as she remembers, too. A pair of cut-off pants, no shirt, barefoot. Almost military buzz cut and way too much muscle for her to concentrate on anything else other than that.Oh how your imagery plays with my mind. *hand under chin, resting it on desk, sighing contentedly ( ... )

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colorless_ideas July 14 2009, 15:57:47 UTC
I know we all have our touchy spot about imprinting, but we know too that it had already happened to them so with that out of the way....she just couldn't fight it any longer?? She felt the gravitational pull to be back home with Quil??

Did you read my previous oneshot linked at summary? That explains better her feelings for Quil. It's more human than magical imprinting ;D

Haha, the wolves are very sexy, how could I not play with your head with Quil's description? *dreamy sigh*

And I'm glad I got you intrigued enough to read the whole thing!

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itslikenature July 14 2009, 16:14:15 UTC
*hides under a sheepish grin* I just saw the reference to that, so I'll be going back to read it asap. Regardless, I liked the feel I got when I read this one. I still feel she couldn't stay away from him any longer. In my mind that's the way it goes anyway. Haha

Great job!

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arion1986 July 20 2009, 20:38:56 UTC
OMG, this was so great! I immensly enjoyed the first one shot you did! And now a multi-chaptered fic? I think I'm in heaven! Thanks so much for this story! A great start!

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bendleshnitz1 December 16 2011, 00:40:38 UTC
I'm so glad she finally came back to him.

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