Comments | colonize_snow: River/Jayne

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River/Jayne

Jan 07, 2009 12:58

Title: En Avant
Author: finding_jay
Pairing: River/Jayne, Kaylee/Simon
Rating: PG:13
Warnings: Violence. Also not exactly dial-up friendly. Set a couple of years after the BDM.
Summary: There are times when Kaylee thinks that River's stuck in one place, frozen like a photograph. The steps are so small that it seems she's a standstill. Instead, River tip-toes ( Read more... )

firefly: jayne/river

Comments 29

memorysdaughter January 7 2009, 05:25:58 UTC

... Wow. This is beautiful.

I have to get a bunch of stuff done tonight but I promise I will read it all in the morning. Thank you so much. :)

colonize_snow January 7 2009, 05:49:34 UTC

No problem =) I just hope you like it once you've finished reading.

open_embrace January 7 2009, 06:09:06 UTC

beautiful! and such a fantastic idea to use the photos with the text :)

colonize_snow January 7 2009, 06:11:12 UTC

Thanks =3 I've been wanting to do something like that for a while, and then the fic ended up popping into my head, and seemed like a good way to do it.

bookaddict43 January 7 2009, 11:50:10 UTC

Love the concept behind this. The photos breaking up the story really set the scene and I like Kaylee's perspective on things.

Beginning and ending with the Secret Santa gifts is a great idea and I love the scene in the cargo bay between Jayne and River.

What a wonderful gift! Thanks for participating in serenity_santa this year :D

colonize_snow January 7 2009, 13:09:53 UTC

Thank you <3

I loved participating, would be happy to do it next Christmas.

gilove2dance January 7 2009, 13:24:08 UTC

Holy. Gorgeous...completely amazing! I love the picture of River and Jayne nekking...hehe!! So good! *memories*

colonize_snow January 7 2009, 13:31:36 UTC

Thank you!

I think it's the phrase 'necking' that makes me laugh the most. It just sounds so 1940s, and yet I can just imagine Kaylee using it in a completely serious manner.

Also, The Unit definitely provides lots of images of Summer that one may not usually consider.

gilove2dance January 7 2009, 18:40:07 UTC

Was that pic actually of Summer?
I also loved the yellow dress one...so pretty!

colonize_snow January 10 2009, 03:53:44 UTC

Yup! It's a cap from her appearance in The Unit. The episode is 'The Water is Wide.'

an_ardent_rain January 7 2009, 18:23:17 UTC

Wow! This was just awesome. You did just a great job with this! It was a really cute idea, and executed so nicely - each little ficlet-photo under the actual "photograph" complemented it so well!

I loved this; I really did. Lovely job!

colonize_snow January 10 2009, 03:55:28 UTC

Thank you very much =)