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dark_dwellersim June 21 2009, 06:49:52 UTC
Wow... Mejaine is so EVIL!

I think the item that's a personality crasher is the little stuffed toy under the bed. :P

I can't wait to see what happens next with Evelynn!

And poor Kismette being stuffed into a dress and heels, so unlike her. :)

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collidingwithme June 21 2009, 13:43:59 UTC
lol, she doesn't see it that way, I suppose. She was nice to Evelynn, afterall. ;)

Yup, you've got it right! :P Bleah, I thought nobody would guess it, since you guys only see half of it.

Well, so far, Mejaine's intentions with Evelynn are pretty much neutral, so she's not in any mortal danger, lol. As for Kismette, this is only the beginning! X) Life is cruel and so she will learn.

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dark_dwellersim June 21 2009, 17:45:32 UTC
Your update was GREAT, Ning. Not boring at all. :)

And I have an eye for details that do not belong.

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collidingwithme June 22 2009, 09:36:07 UTC
:) Thanks, it made me happy to hear that! Phew. (*silly grin*)

Lucky you then, I'm always the last person to know when anything's amiss, lol.

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eastvale June 21 2009, 09:12:15 UTC
Poor Kismette, having to get dressed up and learn etiquette, hopefully Jeremy doesn't overwhelm her! And Mejaine is simply evil, I love it. :D

I didn't realize that Mejaine was over forty. Does that mean Zaelem is as old as her too?

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collidingwithme June 21 2009, 14:32:48 UTC
At least learning the unspoken rules to live by in court will serve her well, don't you think? ;) And of course, Mejaine doesn't see anything wrong with what she did.

Well, the last forty years was when she stopped being the "It" girl. It was mentioned in chapter 8 (totally not expecting you to remember this) that "Even after a hundred years, she was still living in regret." Says something about their lifespan, huh? ;P You'll see in the next chapter.

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eastvale June 21 2009, 18:17:17 UTC
Now that you mention it, I do remember that being mentioned in a previous chapter. :) Thanks for clearing that up and yay for next chapter. :p

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collidingwithme June 22 2009, 09:32:18 UTC
lol, no problem man. :D

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phoenixfg June 21 2009, 12:29:34 UTC
Ugh!! Mejaine gives me the creeps! Seriously! Hopefully Evelynn doesn't turn out to be like her! *shudders*

Kismette's face!! hahaha!! I love them so!

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collidingwithme June 21 2009, 14:39:19 UTC
Evelynn? Her heart is too kind and pure to turn cold and black like Mejaine's! ;)

lol, Kismette doesn't know she's giving away so much from her facial expressions! Glad you loved them! :D

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lilyflower120 June 21 2009, 12:29:56 UTC
"Quite a long one, so please bear with me!" I was squealing with joy when you updated, a long one is even better silly! :)

Oh poor naive Evlynn for not seeing the evilness of Mejane, I hope she's able to figure it out soon before something happens to the poor girl! And where's Zaalem to rescue Kismette from the binds of tight dresses and fancy dinners? :)

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collidingwithme June 21 2009, 15:24:19 UTC
lol, I'm glad you thought so! :D My sister was telling me how boring my update was. Please please pleeeease tell me if that is true okay? I'd rather be criticised than left in the dark. ><

Evelynn is probably too kind and sweet to see the evil side of people. :) lol, Zaelem is MIA now. :D

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collidingwithme June 22 2009, 03:22:24 UTC
Oh well, Kismette didn't want that to be the reason for being adopted, but Jeremy didn't know what she wanted and in hoping to make things better for her by suggesting she get her independence after 21 years old, it made Kismette feel all the more that she isn't wanted for who she is but for what she can do. Okie, quite a long sentence, hope it isn't confusing. :D

lol, Mejaine probably honed this particular aspect of her all the while in Grythen. She definitely wants to keep Zaelem by her side. :) Thank you!

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