Oh man, first? It was worth being on LJ ridiculously early then.
All I can say is Crap. If Zaelem isn't okay... I don't know what. And just when Kismette had figured out that she couldn't be with Charion anyway - not that she had to be with Zaelem, understand, but not being with Charion has, over the course of the last few chapters, become a good thing in and of itself. The whole family she'd be associating with is toxic - even Jeremy knows that, and they're his family.
Evelynn... I have two guesses what you've done, neither of which are good for you in the long run, sweetheart. Just... I don't know, stop haninging out so much with Mejane? Thinking back to how much she cried when leaving the orphanige, knowing on some level the reputation that dancetresses have, she's so different now. She even looks different, much sharper, thinner and more angular and I swear I can't tell if her face changed or if you're just that good with poses, hair and makeup
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It was pretty late for me when I posted. :P You just happen to be online!
I have pretty good timing, eh? ;) It's gonna be hard for Zaelem to be okay though... Kismette has been trained to withold her powers unless she consciously intend for it to flow, and she can't heal scars, which meant that if she doesn't wake up in time and missed the golden period, Zaelem is going to be in a wheelchair for the rest of his life. *gulps*
Oh man, I'm dying to know what you've guessed! :D I love it when you guys speculate, hehe! Mejaine definitely passed some of her secrets on. She's feeling less competitive nowadays. :\ As for Evelynn, her features didn't change, but her make up did! ;) I added make up which deepens cheek hollows, heh. You are way too observant
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Ah Ha! She finally admitted that her heart was with Zaerlum! I really wish she could have talked to Charion about it all, but at least she knows she doesn't want to marry him anymore.
I wonder what that conversation between Jeremy and Deinja was about?
Oh No! Stupid Ice Cream truck! I hope Kismette can heal him!
'What if!' She said 'what if'!! :P I'm not guaranteeing anything mmkay!
HMM... 8) I'm not saying anything if you can't figure out, hehe! *rubs hands*
Unfortunately, Kismette has been trained to withhold her power and release it only when she has the intention to do so. And she can't heal scars, which means that she can't heal wounds after the body has healed it. Zaelem may become permanently disabled if she doesn't wake up in time!
My heart. It was squealing with happiness and you know why. ;) I love youuuuu!!! I'm not going to say too much more but this was a really great chapter!
Also, I love that you've cut back on work for play! YES! DOOOOOO IT! lol
I don't like that you exploded. I shall miss you. *sad face*
LOL nice avatar! XD Um, you're squealing with joy that Zaelem is facing possible death? :P (Hahaha, oh you!)
You know, you totally sounded like a bad influence. But *sigh*, I'm realising this a wee bit too late huh. I've got a month left only. D: NOT ENOUGH ZOMG!!!
I love my avatar! Fassbender! McFassy! ALL THE WAY MAN!
squeeee! random hug attacks! I'VE MISSED YOU! I hate that you have school like, so much, and that you're so studious and well behaved and take it seriously unlike myself. *pout*
I have no choice but to be studious! D: In engineering, if you don't graduate with a second upper honours, you're (most probably) gonna have a hard time finding a job. It's especially true if you want to go into the public sector in Singapore. :( I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!!
What are you worried about with your storytelling? It's as good as it has ever been and I especially loved your writing in this chapter...particularly when Kismette was so conflicted about breaking up with Chairon. I am glad she made the decision to. Now she just has to execute it.
I'm really intrigued by Gwen! I'm looking forward to learning more about her and her role here.
I'm freaking out here for Zaelem and Kismette now! I hope both are alright... Zaelem seemed to take on most of that hit. :(.
I don't know, but I somehow felt something was lacking. Maybe it's just that I haven't got time to really immerse myself into CS this time round. *sigh* Holidays are never long enough, huh. :P I'm relieved that part wasn't boring. :)
Poor Zaelem, I guess. And Kismette can't heal him while she's unconscious; she's been taught to hold her powers back and release it only when she has the intention to. And we don't know when she'll wake up. :S
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All I can say is Crap. If Zaelem isn't okay... I don't know what. And just when Kismette had figured out that she couldn't be with Charion anyway - not that she had to be with Zaelem, understand, but not being with Charion has, over the course of the last few chapters, become a good thing in and of itself. The whole family she'd be associating with is toxic - even Jeremy knows that, and they're his family.
Evelynn... I have two guesses what you've done, neither of which are good for you in the long run, sweetheart. Just... I don't know, stop haninging out so much with Mejane? Thinking back to how much she cried when leaving the orphanige, knowing on some level the reputation that dancetresses have, she's so different now. She even looks different, much sharper, thinner and more angular and I swear I can't tell if her face changed or if you're just that good with poses, hair and makeup ( ... )
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I have pretty good timing, eh? ;) It's gonna be hard for Zaelem to be okay though... Kismette has been trained to withold her powers unless she consciously intend for it to flow, and she can't heal scars, which meant that if she doesn't wake up in time and missed the golden period, Zaelem is going to be in a wheelchair for the rest of his life. *gulps*
Oh man, I'm dying to know what you've guessed! :D I love it when you guys speculate, hehe! Mejaine definitely passed some of her secrets on. She's feeling less competitive nowadays. :\ As for Evelynn, her features didn't change, but her make up did! ;) I added make up which deepens cheek hollows, heh. You are way too observant ( ... )
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I really wish she could have talked to Charion about it all, but at least she knows she doesn't want to marry him anymore.
I wonder what that conversation between Jeremy and Deinja was about?
Oh No! Stupid Ice Cream truck!
I hope Kismette can heal him!
Great update Ning! I look forward to more.
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HMM... 8) I'm not saying anything if you can't figure out, hehe! *rubs hands*
Unfortunately, Kismette has been trained to withhold her power and release it only when she has the intention to do so. And she can't heal scars, which means that she can't heal wounds after the body has healed it. Zaelem may become permanently disabled if she doesn't wake up in time!
:D I'm glad to hear that!
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Also, I love that you've cut back on work for play! YES! DOOOOOO IT! lol
I don't like that you exploded. I shall miss you. *sad face*
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You know, you totally sounded like a bad influence. But *sigh*, I'm realising this a wee bit too late huh. I've got a month left only. D: NOT ENOUGH ZOMG!!!
Hehe, at least it was a dancing banana.
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squeeee! random hug attacks! I'VE MISSED YOU! I hate that you have school like, so much, and that you're so studious and well behaved and take it seriously unlike myself. *pout*
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I'm really intrigued by Gwen! I'm looking forward to learning more about her and her role here.
I'm freaking out here for Zaelem and Kismette now! I hope both are alright... Zaelem seemed to take on most of that hit. :(.
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Poor Zaelem, I guess. And Kismette can't heal him while she's unconscious; she's been taught to hold her powers back and release it only when she has the intention to. And we don't know when she'll wake up. :S
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And thanks for that! ^^ I had a hard time deciding on the contrast and saturation levels for the pictures, hehe. Glad the harsh effect worked!
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