I like the dark pictures -- I think it adds a lot of atmosphere to an already great story.
I'm not so good at leaving feedback, but I really do love this story. It's the only Sim story I really read anymore -- the characters are just so interesting.
I must first tell you that that your avatar made me LOL. XD
Oh *blush* thank you! It always makes me want to jump for joy when I hear that someone loves CS. And it is very nice of you to take the time to leave me a comment. ^^
I'm glad it seemed to suit her after all! :D Every other dress seemed too short, haha.
I was able to figure out what was going on in the robbery scene just fine without the pictures, since you're a great narrator :) Actually, I really liked not being able to see the pictures very well - that way, I got to be really surprised when Kismette found out it was Chairon, because I didn't know it either until then!
OMG, that dirty creepy guy! Ewwww! I never thought I'd say this but go Charion for saving Kismette. But I bet he feels like he's one step ahead now in the race for Kismette's heart since he saved her life. On a serious note though I'm glad Kismette's okay; I'd hate to think what would have happened to her if Charion did not show up when he did. The fanart is fantastic :)
Yay! Go Chairon! 8D Well, he truly is leading that race, haha. That's so right. If Chairon hadn't showed up, Kismette would have 4 holes in her neck, though she could heal them easily. But then again, it's the emotional trauma that's damaging.
Yea, I wish I could paint like that too. You should tell the artist directly! X)
I'm not gonna lie. I feel like Chairon is the kind of guy who would totally set that up to win over Kismette. One! He and Evelynn had some plan. So Evie takes Kismette to a bar? And then she mysteriously falls in? And then some stranger decides to attack her and Chairon coincidentally happens to be there? Nuh-uh. No way. Reeks of planning in my books. Also. I just don't like him. He's too...smarmy. And I don't trust him. And he belongs with Evelynn and Zaelem and Kismette belong together and all your false protests will not dissuade me. Ever.
But it was a fantastic chapter. As always. You should take my passionate ranting and raving about Chairon and Kismette as a compliment. I have this awful sick feeling in my HEART because I care about these characters so much. lol!!!
Haha, can you see how many converts I have now? *am proud* Fine! Stay on your lonely team for all I care! Bleah!
Okay, I'm just kidding. 8( It's not a plan! Lemme break it down for ya: 1, The plan he had with Evelynn was to announce that they're dating, so that the paparazzi wouldn't go after Kismette 2, Evie would never want to lie to Kay and make her believe in a relationship that's just a fake. Plus, Kay was the one who called her for dinner. 3, Kay didn't mysteriously fall in ill (LOL, sorry, I have to add that in). She ate too much and didn't have time to digest. Evie didn't think there could be much for her to digest anyway and pulled her off to dance
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I like the dark pictures -- I think it adds a lot of atmosphere to an already great story.
I'm not so good at leaving feedback, but I really do love this story. It's the only Sim story I really read anymore -- the characters are just so interesting.
And I love Kismette's nightclub outfit! :)
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Oh *blush* thank you! It always makes me want to jump for joy when I hear that someone loves CS. And it is very nice of you to take the time to leave me a comment. ^^
I'm glad it seemed to suit her after all! :D Every other dress seemed too short, haha.
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Ah, thank you. I'm so glad I didn't skim on the description! ^^
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Really? 8D Wow, that makes me feel glad for sticking to my plan, haha. Though I know there's still room for improvement, thanks a lot! ^^
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Yea, I wish I could paint like that too. You should tell the artist directly! X)
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But it was a fantastic chapter. As always. You should take my passionate ranting and raving about Chairon and Kismette as a compliment. I have this awful sick feeling in my HEART because I care about these characters so much. lol!!!
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Okay, I'm just kidding. 8( It's not a plan! Lemme break it down for ya:
1, The plan he had with Evelynn was to announce that they're dating, so that the paparazzi wouldn't go after Kismette
2, Evie would never want to lie to Kay and make her believe in a relationship that's just a fake. Plus, Kay was the one who called her for dinner.
3, Kay didn't mysteriously fall in ill (LOL, sorry, I have to add that in). She ate too much and didn't have time to digest. Evie didn't think there could be much for her to digest anyway and pulled her off to dance ( ... )
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