Comments | colliding_kiss: how shall i speak of doom (1/?)

colliding_kiss

how shall i speak of doom (1/?)

Feb 11, 2010 22:17

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thuperlithp February 12 2010, 06:44:22 UTC

I'm kind of still in love with your writing. This seems to be in a slightly different style to your normal, but I may be remembering incorrectly.

Either way though, I love it. The way you've created large gaps has broken apart thoughts so well. I'm (again) struggling to articulate what I want to for you, so instead I'll just leave it here. You win.

colliding_kiss February 12 2010, 06:53:51 UTC

um YOU win for that review. It might be a little different? It's basically the same as the anatomy of a tidal wave.

Yeah, I love the effects created by big spaces. That, and the one word, trailing off sentences. I love those. :P

Thanks babe <3

thuperlithp February 12 2010, 06:59:34 UTC

It's safe to assume this is a chapterfic? Yes?

Never, ever stop writing.

Oh, btw. I plan on proposing to your writing, don't tell it, I want it to be a surprise. =P

colliding_kiss February 12 2010, 07:09:26 UTC

Yes! It is. This just seemed like a good place to cut off - in Word, it's already the longest thing I've ever written. It's all very exciting :)

I won't!

I won't tell, either. It'll be our little secret.

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frychicken February 12 2010, 06:47:21 UTC

UM UM UM.

UM.

UM.

I MIGHT BE DEAD?

colliding_kiss February 12 2010, 06:54:44 UTC

OMG YOU CAN'T BE DEAD BECAUSE THEN THERE WILL BE NO MORE OF YOUR FIC AND I WILL BE DEAD TOO.

DO YOU SEE NOW WHY THIS WAS SUCH A BITCH TO HTML FORMAT?

frychicken February 12 2010, 07:02:41 UTC

I AM SITTING HERE, REREADING IT AND I AM FUCKING FLOORED.

AMAZING. NEVER STOP.

colliding_kiss February 12 2010, 07:07:14 UTC

CONSIDERING HOW BRILLIANTLY YOU WRITE I AM INCREDIBLY HONOURED. LIKE, FOR REAL. THAT MEANS A LOT COMING FROM YOU. THANK YOU BB ♥ ♥ ♥

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xxangelsblood February 12 2010, 17:15:51 UTC

...*ded*

Jesus. I loves it.

colliding_kiss February 12 2010, 21:03:56 UTC

I loves you :D

xxangelsblood February 12 2010, 21:05:20 UTC

I loves you ! =D

colliding_kiss February 12 2010, 21:06:42 UTC

Yay! My love is requited :)

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wfylove February 12 2010, 19:48:32 UTC

Lovely fic! I can't wait for the other chapter! i have to though! you are amazing at writing, seriously!

colliding_kiss February 12 2010, 21:04:22 UTC

thank you so much! ♥

xam452 February 12 2010, 20:41:35 UTC

Ummm *clears throat*

*gets on one knee*

Will you update it? *flutters eyes*

Very soon? Yea? ok? yea good!

PS: obv, that was awesome!

colliding_kiss February 12 2010, 21:05:15 UTC

I will update it as soon as I possibly can :)

Thank youuuu :)