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Nov 10, 2005 06:28

This is what I was going to do originally - update the fic as I wrote it. So better to start late than never, right? Anyway, here's the next part, I figured I'd post it before I go to work. If you haven't read the other thing I posted this morning, make sure you do that now, else this won't make sense. Okay. This also includes the very first ( Read more... )

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mnyclp November 11 2005, 06:47:46 UTC
You're imagery is amazing. Their thoughts and physical reactions jump off the page. So well done!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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anonymous November 11 2005, 11:06:21 UTC
Justin. He says it inside his head now, and the words are without quotations, but it doesn’t bother him. I mean it. Don’t worry about it, just… don’t do it.

*sigh* Why is this SO amazing??

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miss_charmed November 11 2005, 13:59:00 UTC
Wow. I'm always more than willing to stop whatever else I'm doing to read an update of this. ♥

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sherebis November 13 2005, 18:07:33 UTC
You're killin' me here.... poor justin... I wonder if one of his parents will see the international news and claim Justin, either really wanting him or trying to get something out of the situation. that would be crazy!!

and i want more b/j action... I can't wait to see the fall out of that kiss.

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stillabet November 14 2005, 09:58:34 UTC
So did you mean for the blue light of the TV to echo the blue light over the bed in the loft? Because if so that's brilliant, and if not it's either a funny coincidence or some weird subconscious thing you did there.

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