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Comment-A-Thon: Round 2 - Prompt Fest

Jan 01, 2011 15:31

Welcome to round 2, which is going to be a little different from round one. Below is a list of prompts, the challenge...

Readers: You have one of two choices - make a request as usual or make a request based on one of the prompts from the list below. Format remains the same.

Prompt/Request:
Characters:
I would Like:
I Don't Want:

Writers: You can either ( Read more... )

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SPOILER AHEAD swanpride January 20 2011, 15:11:12 UTC

Because this request relates to the new episode. The scene where Larson gets one over Neal and Neal asking for Combat Training really niggles my mind.

Prompt/Request: I want a story which relates to the scene.

Characters: Whoever you want...Neal doesn't even have to be in it, it can be another character thinking about Neal too.

I would Like: Some character-analysis would be nice, othewise, do what you want.

I Don't Want: Neal going into Combat Training and becomming a super-fighter. Whimpy-Neal. (he can be traumazied, but keep in mind that this wasn't his first dangerous situation by far).

Re: SPOILER AHEAD kriadydragon January 20 2011, 21:42:48 UTC

Yes to this! :D I've totally been trying to think up something along these lines. I don't see Neal going into combat training, but perhaps take a defense class? After all, he can't run all the time.

Would it be okay if I had something happen to Neal? Nothing major, just something to get the the other character's (I'm thinking Peter) thought processes going?

Re: SPOILER AHEAD swanpride January 20 2011, 22:24:04 UTC

Totally okay...(as long as you are careful his poor artistic hands)

I look forward to whatever you think up.

Re: SPOILER AHEAD kriadydragon January 25 2011, 21:26:02 UTC

Your prompt is my command :D Here it be at last.

For the Defense - http://kriadydragon.livejournal.com/237834.html

Re: SPOILER AHEAD swanpride January 25 2011, 21:49:28 UTC

Thank you! That was great...I especially liked the emphasis in the difference between self defense and combat. And the image of Neal, straighten out his sweaty T-Shirt (still laughing)....

Re: SPOILER AHEAD imbecamiel April 20 2011, 04:16:01 UTC

Mmkay, I totally didn't mean to do anything for this. Partly because, well, I've only just finished watching season one, and haven't seen the episode referred to. XD

Buuuut... while I was lying in bed at one o'clock, trying to fall asleep, this prompt randomly popped into my mind again, and I thought - "Oh, hey, I should totally write something for that." 'Cause it's one of the few cop-show-type scenarios where I actually can write what I know. And these ideas always seem so much more brilliant in the wee hours of the morning. So yeah. I ended up staying awake until probably two, writing the thing in my head because I didn't want to wake my sister up. And then I got up this morning, and lo and behold, it still made sense.

So here it is - prompt response number two!

Re: SPOILER AHEAD swanpride April 20 2011, 09:50:57 UTC

Wow, a second fill. Thank you!

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