Comment-a-Thon: Round 1

[kriadydragon]

December's here all ready? Wow. Now we can finally get this show on the road.

First off, Rule reminders:

Comments

[kajahryujin]

Prompt/Request: Neal somehow incapacitated with a fever (through illness or infection due to an injury) and having delirious delusions.

Characters: Mainly Neal, Peter, and Elizabeth, other characters if needed to explain circumstances in the story.

I would like: Neal in his delirious state to be reverting to more childish mannerisms and somehow revealing that was not well growing up in the Caffrey household. Peter and Elizabeth step into a surrogate parental role to calm him down and make him feel safe.

I would not like: Nothing really, up to the author.

[kriadydragon]

Heh, I'm currently working on this very story, but it keeps insisting on being as long as possible ;)

Long Night (Rated PG-13)

[kriadydragon]

Warnings: Mentions of past child abuse but nothing explicit.

Due to length I had to post the story on my journal. Hope you enjoy.

http://kriadydragon.livejournal.com/228805.html