fic: twilight - my body is a cage (edward/bella)

[boundary]

title. my body is a cage
fandom/pairing. twilight / edward/bella
rating. pg-13, for mild violence
summary. It is the day Bella has waited for, the day she will become immortal and not worry about words like eternity and time. However, she doesn't register just how much of an effect her transformation will have on Edward.
notes. Dedicated and betaed

Comments

[texxxan]

damn this is good. it made my heart beat increase while reading it, hahahaha.

[certitudes]

this is delightfully creepy.

[rocknload]

I don't care much for Twilight, but I enjoyed reading this a lot.

[ragnarok_08]

Whoa - that was so cool....and so creepy.

[frostbit_sky]

Well done. You got Edward's hesitation and regret and and Bella's want exactly right.

I caught a small typo at the beginning:
In three hours, she’ll be gone and a bloodthirsty statue in her place.

In three days

[boundary]

thank you!

and i meant, hours. meaning three hours from that point in the fic, edward will be taking her life. :)

[frostbit_sky]

ohhh, gotcha ;)