Kyuhyun blinked at him as though he were the lowest functioning creature on earth. “Yeah? What, was I going to show up with a suitcase and be all “Congratulations, I’m moving in!”” Kyuhyun's sarcasm. It bites XD And Geng is sometimes really too slow
“I’ll get Siwon a lifetime supply of Kleenex for his birthday.” “You think that’ll be enough?” “Maybe not for you.” It's hard to wrap my head around the idea that Geng would cry more than Mi though obviously Eeteuk is the leader in that department♥ but those lines are cute :3
It's such a nice way for them to finally have another child without going through the possibly awkward other choices. “Daddy is my daddy,” she said. “But will you be my papa?” OHMYGOSH I ALREADY LOVE YUNJEE SO MUCH EVEN THOUGH SHE DOESN'T EVEN REALLY EXIST WHY ARE YOU BRINGING IN ANOTHER CHILD TO STEAL MY HEART.
“Is that okay with you, Daddy?” Siwon smiled, kissing his cheek. “That’s okay with me, Papa.” Amusing how a few months ago the sihan stalked teach other and now they're practically married with two kids
( ... )
Kay, coherent comment--it is 1:16 in the morning: STARTO!
So first off, I think the Sihan's valiant and certainly commendable attempts to make this chapter theirs, and Henhae strove to make sure we still remembered them (even if they're my sjm otp in this fic they're still a minor role and I think even Yunnee gets more screentime but I'm not complaining), the Qmi inevitably stole everyone's hearts again. AGAIN. For the 6th or so chapter in a row, I think. The reason for that is probably the realisticness of their relationship. Sure, Sihan's new baby, geng's mom, the irresponsible sister, the skeptical parents and Yunjee (OH, YUNJEE) are all definitely believable, but it feels like the emotional depths of their relationship aren't as deep as they could be--that is, probably because they reached happiness far earlier and with more ease than Qmi. Speaking of which, the continuing frustratinonkills me. XD like I said before, the realisticness of their feelings and the slight awkwardness and miscommunication and trust issues and...guh.
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Despite SiHan's efforts, like you said, it does end up as Kyu and Mi's story. <3 And I worried when I started writing it cause Siwon was being an attention hound, but it all evened out in the end. XD So all that just makes me unspeakably happy. <3 A lot of what I was striving for, and hoping for. And worried about. x.x
HenHae getting less time than Yunjee, oh it is probably sadly so. My planning brain didn't allow for a third pairing until it was so late that I'm still trying to find holes to stuff them into (and brain cells to squeeze them out of). *pets them* (all the more reason they deserve their own story)... It'll probably sink into Henry in stages. :\
<3 Cute kids, what can I say? Geng sure was susceptible, too. <3 (and me, clearly _-_)
Reading it at 1:38am made me smile. XD (then I passed out) Thanks so much for both of them~! Puts stars in my eyes. XD
OH MY GOD. THIS. THISSS. My favorite chapter thus far. I......NEED A SECOND TO DIGEST THIS. AND AN OBLIGATORY KEYBOARD SMASH IS NEEDED IN 3...2...1 LQJREHL;KJSAFDKLJASDFKLJHNK!!!!KSDHFJ!!!!! ADKSFKAJSDHFKLJASHFDKJEHFKLJASHDFKLJAHFKAJDH
Ok, now that my incoherent spaz fest is over, let me start my coherent one :D!
OMG BABY.BABYYYYY. I wasn't expecting that AT ALL. I mean, sure, Siwon's sister was a shade ball and all, but like, I did not see her trying to push another kid on him....But Siwon being Siwon and a loving brother<3 AND THEN HANNIE BEING OK WITH IT AND FALLING IN LOVE WITH THE BABY AND SUCH. ASKJDHFL STOP WITH THE AMAZING SIHAN-NESS, CAUSE IMMA DIE OF THEIR PERFECT LOVE AND RELATIONSHIP XD(And by this I mean keep going because I love them so much <3<3) “This means you and me. We’re a set, Geng. They’ll get used to that. I need you with me though every step because we belong together.”
AND THEN THIS
“You know how you look with him in your arms
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The baby clues were accidentally a chapter too early. XD SiHan. <3 *pets them for giving me ideas* That was awkward for him to meet Siwon's parents like that. x.x Could've been worse I guess. Glad Siwon clues in on those things, or really. >.>
Sad Henry makes everyone sad. :( :( And I guess they really are all living together, one of them just has two residences. Cause that makes sense, Hae... :\
Don't feel bad for long comments. Ever. XD
*accepts bet money* And hahaha... you saw that huh? XD I was hoping someone caught that. Oh Kyu... He's kicking down those barriers. :) :)
Siwon is truly Hannie's Knight in shining armor XDXD Always knowing what to say or do to make Hannie feel loved or comfortable <3<3<3 And can I say I'm ready for some newborn baby craziness?? XDXD
And I feel like Donghae isn't always in there 100% of the time, I dont know, I feel like if Henry's already there all the time and the people know that he has a separate apartment, wouldn't that mean they knew that he wasn't staying at said apartment?? I mean, come on Donghae :/
And I try not too, until I see them stretch down the page XDXD
And of course I did!! I read it and was like 'OMG, NO WAY' then proceeded to laugh very hard and loud XDXD AND it's about time one of them starting kicking down those barriers!!!! Y'all need to have more heart-to-hearts so the more intense lovin can commence!!! -throws them into a closet together and locks the door- >D
XD XD Siwon's babies, they never grow up. Yay baby. :D :D Was so glad I was able to fit that storyline in. *_*
<3 Kyu... And the uncle, we're getting there... Slowly. I think I'm breaking another chapter into two. We'd get there a lot quicker if I hadn't written so much. _-_ (I'm probably the only one who will complain about that. The story could've been more streamlined, right? Right? >.>)
hahaha i personally find that a terrifying thought. having kids and then they don't ever grow up and leave? scary ;_________; *hides in corner that was formerly for emo-time*
olol, i think that this kind of story is SUPPOSED to be really long, makes it more fun~ plus we can wait for the uncle, if there's MORE QMI while we do XDXDXDXDXDXD
That would be scary. *_* Seriously, I bow to parents. Like, I don't even know. XD
This is kind of longer than it was supposed to be though. _-_ (waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay longer) The chapter count is deceiving. It's like. XD I don't even know. I'm praying I find the end before I trip over 150k. ;_; Oh believe me, lol. KyuMi there is little end to. XD
ANOTHER CHILD. wow, did not see that coming. at all. geng is such a mom here. he always feels like a mom, but now with a baby! XD instant mom. YUNJOONG LOOKS REALLY CUTE IN MY MIND.
kyumi trust issues = ;___; but the communication they have afterwards :| wow. iono, a lot of couples break up cause they can't talk it out. this is really new to me. lol :D which is good.
“You want to sleep with me?” Zhou Mi asked in a small voice. lol, duh. :D
and... i hope this next part makes sense, as it is supposed to be replied to the previous chapter, but i'm lazy and a horrible fan. but...
i'm okay with being blamed for wonderful, amazing things. like blohyuk xD
The baby clue sister-call was a chapter earlier than it should have been. Or something. XD XD XD They have a "his and ours" family now. XD
Would someone have eaten me for dinner if KyuMi had broken up? hah. I value my life. Seriously, though... Not like there aren't bumps in the road... Kyu had been thinking for so long,he just had to get some of his flattened out. Mi...subtle thinker. >.>
Seriously duh. XD That whole conversation ended up more awkward than anticipated.
I'm sure you are okay with being blamed for blohyuk. :P When I come to beat on your door with a bucket of whines, you may not be quite so eager...
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“I’ll get Siwon a lifetime supply of Kleenex for his birthday.”
“You think that’ll be enough?”
“Maybe not for you.”
It's hard to wrap my head around the idea that Geng would cry more than Mi though obviously Eeteuk is the leader in that department♥ but those lines are cute :3
It's such a nice way for them to finally have another child without going through the possibly awkward other choices.
“Daddy is my daddy,” she said. “But will you be my papa?” OHMYGOSH I ALREADY LOVE YUNJEE SO MUCH EVEN THOUGH SHE DOESN'T EVEN REALLY EXIST WHY ARE YOU BRINGING IN ANOTHER CHILD TO STEAL MY HEART.
“Is that okay with you, Daddy?” Siwon smiled, kissing his cheek. “That’s okay with me, Papa.” Amusing how a few months ago the sihan stalked teach other and now they're practically married with two kids ( ... )
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So first off, I think the Sihan's valiant and certainly commendable attempts to make this chapter theirs, and Henhae strove to make sure we still remembered them (even if they're my sjm otp in this fic they're still a minor role and I think even Yunnee gets more screentime but I'm not complaining), the Qmi inevitably stole everyone's hearts again. AGAIN. For the 6th or so chapter in a row, I think. The reason for that is probably the realisticness of their relationship. Sure, Sihan's new baby, geng's mom, the irresponsible sister, the skeptical parents and Yunjee (OH, YUNJEE) are all definitely believable, but it feels like the emotional depths of their relationship aren't as deep as they could be--that is, probably because they reached happiness far earlier and with more ease than Qmi. Speaking of which, the continuing frustratinonkills me. XD like I said before, the realisticness of their feelings and the slight awkwardness and miscommunication and trust issues and...guh. ( ... )
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HenHae getting less time than Yunjee, oh it is probably sadly so. My planning brain didn't allow for a third pairing until it was so late that I'm still trying to find holes to stuff them into (and brain cells to squeeze them out of). *pets them* (all the more reason they deserve their own story)... It'll probably sink into Henry in stages. :\
<3 Cute kids, what can I say? Geng sure was susceptible, too. <3 (and me, clearly _-_)
Reading it at 1:38am made me smile. XD (then I passed out) Thanks so much for both of them~! Puts stars in my eyes. XD
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THIS.
THISSS.
My favorite chapter thus far.
I......NEED A SECOND TO DIGEST THIS. AND AN OBLIGATORY KEYBOARD SMASH IS NEEDED IN 3...2...1
LQJREHL;KJSAFDKLJASDFKLJHNK!!!!KSDHFJ!!!!!
ADKSFKAJSDHFKLJASHFDKJEHFKLJASHDFKLJAHFKAJDH
Ok, now that my incoherent spaz fest is over, let me start my coherent one :D!
OMG BABY.BABYYYYY. I wasn't expecting that AT ALL. I mean, sure, Siwon's sister was a shade ball and all, but like, I did not see her trying to push another kid on him....But Siwon being Siwon and a loving brother<3 AND THEN HANNIE BEING OK WITH IT AND FALLING IN LOVE WITH THE BABY AND SUCH. ASKJDHFL STOP WITH THE AMAZING SIHAN-NESS, CAUSE IMMA DIE OF THEIR PERFECT LOVE AND RELATIONSHIP XD(And by this I mean keep going because I love them so much <3<3)
“This means you and me. We’re a set, Geng. They’ll get used to that. I need you with me though every step because we belong together.”
AND THEN THIS
“You know how you look with him in your arms ( ... )
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Sad Henry makes everyone sad. :( :( And I guess they really are all living together, one of them just has two residences. Cause that makes sense, Hae... :\
Don't feel bad for long comments. Ever. XD
*accepts bet money* And hahaha... you saw that huh? XD I was hoping someone caught that. Oh Kyu... He's kicking down those barriers. :) :)
Thanks so much~~! :D
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And I feel like Donghae isn't always in there 100% of the time, I dont know, I feel like if Henry's already there all the time and the people know that he has a separate apartment, wouldn't that mean they knew that he wasn't staying at said apartment?? I mean, come on Donghae :/
And I try not too, until I see them stretch down the page XDXD
And of course I did!! I read it and was like 'OMG, NO WAY' then proceeded to laugh very hard and loud XDXD AND it's about time one of them starting kicking down those barriers!!!! Y'all need to have more heart-to-hearts so the more intense lovin can commence!!! -throws them into a closet together and locks the door- >D
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Thank you~! :D
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“Small is relative,” Siwon said. “Tell that to the people pushing them out.”
All four men had a moment of silence as that thought sank home.
“What do you mean?” Yunjee asked, querying the odd statement.
“It’s okay, honey, you’ll never be old enough to find out,” Siwon told her, LMFAO that was actually my favourite part, surprisingly XD YAY NEW BABY~
also, YAY QMI! ♥♥♥ =D but i'm still really curious about the uncle =S
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<3 Kyu... And the uncle, we're getting there... Slowly. I think I'm breaking another chapter into two. We'd get there a lot quicker if I hadn't written so much. _-_ (I'm probably the only one who will complain about that. The story could've been more streamlined, right? Right? >.>)
<3 Thank so much~~! :D
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olol, i think that this kind of story is SUPPOSED to be really long, makes it more fun~ plus we can wait for the uncle, if there's MORE QMI while we do XDXDXDXDXDXD
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This is kind of longer than it was supposed to be though. _-_ (waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay longer) The chapter count is deceiving. It's like. XD I don't even know. I'm praying I find the end before I trip over 150k. ;_; Oh believe me, lol. KyuMi there is little end to. XD
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kyumi trust issues = ;___; but the communication they have afterwards :| wow. iono, a lot of couples break up cause they can't talk it out. this is really new to me. lol :D which is good.
“You want to sleep with me?” Zhou Mi asked in a small voice.
lol, duh. :D
and... i hope this next part makes sense, as it is supposed to be replied to the previous chapter, but i'm lazy and a horrible fan. but...
i'm okay with being blamed for wonderful, amazing things. like blohyuk xD
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Would someone have eaten me for dinner if KyuMi had broken up? hah. I value my life. Seriously, though... Not like there aren't bumps in the road... Kyu had been thinking for so long,he just had to get some of his flattened out. Mi...subtle thinker. >.>
Seriously duh. XD That whole conversation ended up more awkward than anticipated.
I'm sure you are okay with being blamed for blohyuk. :P When I come to beat on your door with a bucket of whines, you may not be quite so eager...
Thank you~~! <3
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