Friendship

[cole_xxxx]

Title: Friendship
Fandom: Stardust
Characters: Prince Septimus, OFC
Prompt: #25- Strangers
Word Count: 422
Rating: General
Summary: A friendly woman is determined to soften Septimus, but she seems to catch him in a bad mood.
Author's Notes: It's random. Based on the movie because I have yet to get my hands on a copy of the book. First Stardust

Comments

[cole_xxxx]

Lol I suppose she is, I needed someone a bit bright and perfect. :]
WOO slash. I have some slashy ideas in my brainbox atm, so I'll have to write those soon.
Thanks for the review :)

[cole_xxxx]

OOOO!
I will definately read that. *goes*

[dancesontrains]

The story is well-written, with perfect grammer and punctuation.

Unfortunately, I agree with the person above me; your OC is too perfect. And I'm trying to write a female OC for a Doctor Who fic, so I have a vague idea about such things.

I'm really sorry for the negative review.

[cole_xxxx]

Lol no problem, criticism is goood. :)
I know what you mean about her being perfect, I decided to write her like that because it went well with my purposes.
Good luck with your OFC for Doctor Who! (I love Doctor Who XD)
Thanks for the review!

[dancesontrains]

Fair enough if that's what you were aiming for.
Thanks for the good luck, its for a big bang challenge (at least twenty thousand words) so I'll need it :)

[mererid]

I loved the little detail about him being shocked that she dared to sit down without asking permission first. :D And I'm dying to know what he was about to say when she interrupted him with her "Friendship" outburst. ;)

Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. :D

[cole_xxxx]

Hmm I feel like writing another one-shot with these two characters, I feel like exploring her more. Hmm.
Thanks for the comment! :]