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coldthermistor

Anabasis: Part Four: 11

Feb 07, 2011 05:55

Title: Anabasis
Author: coldthermistor
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arthur, cobb, eames, robert, inception, anabasis, saito, fanfiction, arthur/cobb, yusuf

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*3* anonymous February 7 2011, 06:57:08 UTC

That was awesome. An excellent parallel to the movie that would have fit as canon perfectly imho.

Re: *3* coldthermistor February 7 2011, 07:31:05 UTC

Thank you :)

soda_and_capes February 7 2011, 14:48:14 UTC

Wow. Yeah, that was definitely excellent. Arthur and Cobb's trust issues are my favorite thing ever, and man, you can certainly write plot. This thing was a monster, and you did a fucking awesome job. ♥

coldthermistor February 7 2011, 15:07:00 UTC

Thanks, dude! :D I'm sorry for plodding through your fic and the Wolf Tales stuff. Mostly it's the paper on this weekend and RL issues and I'm definitely getting on to them :D (If I get Paypal together in a bit too late, I'm fine with no fic or anything, seriously. Sorry for the mess!)

And heh, glad you enjoyed it ;) One hell of a monster to write, so I'm glad the plot panned out! :D

soda_and_capes February 7 2011, 16:57:32 UTC

Oh, no worries at all! <33333 And no hurry, I won't need the money for a few months yet.

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coldthermistor February 7 2011, 15:12:01 UTC

the exact breakdown - eh, sorry, come again? :S

Sorry man, the Fischer thing just popped in there :P Most of the time, it felt like the betrayal theme was getting the better of me and whacking me left right and centre with crazy sentences that I swore I hadn't typed ;)

(THANK YOU, YOU TAKE ALL THE CREDIT FOR THE KICK THAT WORKED LOL.)

Am glad you enjoyed this! :D

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coldthermistor February 7 2011, 16:12:31 UTC

...Dude, you just made me scrawl a quick piece of art in response to that. In short:

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coldthermistor February 8 2011, 10:40:45 UTC

Thank you :)

lucdarling February 9 2011, 01:55:54 UTC

Wow, this was amazing!! The level of tension between Cobb & projection!Arthur, real!Arthur showing up to help, Saito's secrecy (though I did guess that Arthur was alive.), Yusuf being a BAMF driver... Ariadne was major cute, yelling her name as real!Arthur went to set the charges. and then you have the crux of Cobb forgiving himself, then the rescue from Limbo.

Oh there are so many excellent parts, I'd be here all night trying to quote them! The descriptions flowed with the action sequences really well, the background story hinted at throughout was a nice touch, as Cobb tried to figure it out. Eames shocking the dreamers was awesome!

A++++ for the epic length & imagery & characterization.

coldthermistor February 9 2011, 06:48:23 UTC

Thank you! :)

I'm glad you guessed Arthur was alive. I was worried I hadn't embedded enough clues in the story or anything! Glad to know you enjoyed it :)